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1楼2011-03-01 15:58回复
    都是早期作品了。高二的。第一首《秘密花园》。
    The Secret Garden         
    by:小鱼
    Standing in front of the garden gate, we wonder:
    Who are we?
    Other than a crowd of mournful optimists,
    Submerged in deafening silence
    Of our every minor crisis?
    The frequent return of melancholy triumphs over our smiles,
    Replaces happiness with
    Mass misery.
    So someone created this secret garden,
    Where syllables and words twirl freely under the silvery moonlight—
    A tango or ballet according to their mood.
    In this concealed, primordial space,
    We spill blue ink along with our hearts
    Onto every surface imaginable.
    We make the strange familiar;
    The familiar strange.
    We disregard existing creeds
    To conjure up our own faith.
    When light melts into darkness,
    A soul screams for recognition.
    And there is its counterpart, smiling and gently
    Responding to the call. 


    2楼2011-03-01 16:03
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      第二首《救赎》。
      Extrication
      by: 小鱼
      You taste the heavy color of metallic silver
      on the tip of my tongue.
      Unlike others who shy away from me
      You sow the seed of courage
      by carving love into my thumping heart.
      Alas, you say.
      I want to give it a touch of spicy flavor—happiness maybe?
      I nodded as tears broke free
      In delicate silence,
      For you promised to carry on your shoulders my universe
      In its entirety.
      I, the needy Princess of your Kingdom,
      dressed in the softest sari,
      tiptoe into the sacred shrine
      and pray for our encounter in reincarnation.
      For you are my savior;
      the only god I desire.


      3楼2011-03-01 16:07
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        第三首《游戏人生》。还得了个三等奖哈哈。
        The Game
        by: 小鱼
        A game with half of the puzzle pieces gone
        Brims the player of despair,
        Slithering down his throat like a poisonous snake.
        The player, trapped and cornered,
        Puts on a fight
        But to no avail,
        For his soul is enchained to
        The missing puzzle pieces.
        So to revive as a warrior of earthly life,
        He must adopt
        The intricate art of oblivion. 


        4楼2011-03-01 16:12
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          下面的诗看起来要顺眼些了。稍微近期点的。第一首《猜谜》。
          A Riddle      by: 小鱼
          She wraps her fingers around the profound blueness.
          Golden flakes plant on it
          A gentle kiss.
          The twang is hidden
          Behind the veil.
          Her long eyelashes bat slightly,
          As a butterfly flutters its wings.
          Mystifying power, unspoken beauty, intense panic.
          It’s a piece of rock in hand.
          Teardrop personified.
          (谜底:青金石)


          5楼2011-03-01 16:17
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            第二首:《迷宫》。
            Labyrinth   by: 小鱼      
            Entrapped in a double-walled sac,
            He wonders around and around.
            Layers, lining, and the pumping sound.
            Solid ventricle, fragile chamber, elastic valves.
            No exit to be found.   
            


            6楼2011-03-01 16:19
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              第三首:《梭哈》。
              ShowHand        by:小鱼
              A magician, a mind-reader, an invincible king.
              He checks, calls and raises.
              The bottom deal is ace of spade.
              His heart bleeds diamonds, as hysteria erupts
              In a club filled with clowns.
              


              7楼2011-03-01 16:21
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                最后一首算最精辟的:《娘子》。灵感来源是林语堂的《京华烟云》。
                The Chinese Bride    
                by: 小鱼
                The headpiece weighs heavily,
                An overcrowded sea of plump pearls and scarlet tassels
                Rimmed by the embroidery of blue threads like waves.
                First bow to the Heaven and Earth.
                She bends under the familiar weight.
                Second bow to parents and in-laws.
                Her neck feels sour.
                Third bow to each other.
                She turns to her side,
                Bowing towards the thin air.  


                8楼2011-03-01 16:25
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                  嗯……最近空间大整顿来着。如有需要讨论英文文学的,欢迎来小舍一游。
                  游走游走~~~~~~~~~~


                  9楼2011-03-01 22:56
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                    有爱已精。欢迎有才的吧亲来到这里。这里废柴璇。


                    10楼2011-03-05 20:06
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                      加精了……感谢吧主!互相切磋,共同进步。


                      11楼2011-03-06 03:35
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                        虽然格式不对但是贴子很有质量所以没关系的。我也只能算个诗歌爱好者,欢迎常来哦,就是我现在学习比较忙,亲怎么称呼呢?


                        12楼2011-03-13 17:53
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                          小鱼,看来你写诗不是一天两天了
                          对于我这个欣赏者来说真是困难呢
                          恩,生词很多,汗颜啊~


                          13楼2011-03-13 21:51
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                            Call me anything you like. I don't really care. 么么,叫我小鱼好啦。
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                            最开始时最求华丽辞藻,你还是先从后面的倒着看吧。真正的好诗,是平淡出真知啊。


                            14楼2011-03-15 10:50
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                              你有看过泰戈尔或者是那些大文豪的诗集么?


                              15楼2011-03-15 11:06
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