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                                                                      亘古匆匆岁月悠,
                                                                      物华冉冉几时休。
                                                                      芳华怎敌东逝水,
                                                                      暮然回首终觉悔。
                                                                      流年只怨恋红尘,
                                                                      醉恋红尘君未闻。
                                                                      空令蹉跎误怜人,
                                                                      红颜如水我如尘。



IP属地:甘肃1楼2011-06-25 11:57回复
    不错。。希望楼主更多作品。。


    2楼2011-06-25 19:41
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      比我的《红尘怨》写得要有深度


      IP属地:北京3楼2011-07-08 18:49
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        瞎套类…楼上谦虚了


        IP属地:甘肃来自手机贴吧4楼2011-07-12 20:49
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          有水平!


          5楼2011-07-13 14:11
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            装毁啦


            来自手机贴吧6楼2011-07-14 17:43
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              7楼2011-08-07 15:43
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                666


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