
作文:(接上)
(4) 描写人物时,要生动具体,例如:
外表特征:tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。
服饰颜色:red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。
内心境界:glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。
感情描写:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。
动作描写:come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。
(5) 上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则,因此同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法:
·表示并列关系的过渡词:and, as well as, or …
·表示转折关系的过渡词:but, yet, however …
·表示时间关系的过渡词:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
·表示空间关系的过渡词:near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside …
·表示比较关系的过渡词:in the same way, just like, just as …
·表示对照关系的过渡词:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though …
·表示递进关系的过渡词: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again …
·表示因果关系的过渡词:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result…
·表示解释说明的过渡词:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually …
·表示强调的过渡词:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important …
·表示目的的过渡词:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, …
·表示列举的过渡词:for example , such as …
·表示总结性的过渡词:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking …