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【幽凡无差】This Love(寂寞产物,意识流无逻辑。E文注意)

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1楼2011-10-22 21:54回复
    "Dearly beloved, we are gathered here to commemorate the life and death of Mr Long You…"
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    Jiang Yunfan closed the door, his back aching, eyes weary.
    A small cardboard box in his hands.
    Minutes ago he asked his doctor where he was. Then they gave him this box.
    A box with black label and white writing on it.
    The writing says, Long You.
    Then the world shut down, his sight blurred like nightmare.
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    "To many of us, he was a great man, an invaluable kin, comforting us through all the pain. "
    ————————————————————————
    He stared at the box and the writing on it. Suddenly he felt he cannot read. The box was very light.
    He is in it. HE is in IT.
    Nothing better.
    He remembered that young yet fair man. Long You, who always wears that smirk on his face. His hair is-was silky , his eyes deep, it was difficult to meet your own shadow in them.
    Yunfan shook his head. There's no point in dwelling in the past.
    He ignored those wet drops on the label. It must be the rain.
    ————————————————TBC————————————————


    2楼2011-10-22 21:55
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      -W-


      IP属地:北京来自掌上百度3楼2011-10-22 21:58
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        楼主你知道吗我这个六年级小学生看到此文第一眼就自觉的去对月流泪对花叹息了OJL


        IP属地:北京来自掌上百度4楼2011-10-22 22:03
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          糟糕好久没看英文了好陌生,看得好勉强,捂脸


          5楼2011-10-22 22:06
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            表示初三英语尖子无鸭梨 =w=


            IP属地:上海来自掌上百度6楼2011-10-22 22:09
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              我只是觉得吧主又要风中凌乱了
              下次就不是“一屏幕全是文”了,是“竟然还有外语文”了。


              IP属地:北京7楼2011-10-22 22:15
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                ……你妹外语弱项伤不起啊!


                IP属地:上海来自掌上百度8楼2011-10-22 22:21
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                  但是读了一遍还是大致读懂了(摊手


                  IP属地:上海来自掌上百度9楼2011-10-22 22:23
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                    果断下了一个金山词霸。
                    还是弱弱问一句。开篇龙少就死了?


                    10楼2011-10-22 22:48
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                      是死了吧= =
                      意识流+英文什么的……


                      11楼2011-10-22 23:29
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