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1楼2012-07-06 13:25回复
    确切的说应该是Directions才对……
    Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should
    1)describe the drawing briefly
    2)explain its intended meaning, and then
    3)support your view an example/examples


    2楼2012-07-06 13:28
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      要求的是描述漫画,漫画的内容其实就是足球场上,前锋带球单刀对阵守门员。此时守门员脑海里想的是自己的身体十分渺小而身后的门无比巨大,球门难守,而前锋脑海里想的是球门非常小,守门员却十分巨大把整个门都挡住了,无法破门。我想寓意你懂的0 0(夸大困难,丧失信心)
      第1段可以采用描述法的句型来写。第2段为了说明“夸大困难,丧失信心”,可以采用说明法和议论法的句型来表达。第3段根据提纲要求,应采用举例法来阐述,如:For example,Let's take... for example.
      以下范文
      


      3楼2012-07-06 13:34
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        As is depicted by the picture,the striker is attacking the opponent's goal. It seems to him that the goal-keeper is so huge that he can't score.But the goal-keeper feels that he himself is too tiny to fulfill his duty.
        The picture is really thought-provoking. I think, the drawer intends to tell usthat both of the soccer players in the picture highly exaggerate the difficulties they are confronted with and lose their self-confidence. In my opinion,whatever one does,he should do his job with confidence.Without confidence,he can't achieve anything.In reality,however,we do see a lot of people who always complain that they are lacking in the ability to do something or that the situation is too critical for them to deal with.This only shows that they have lost heart.
        Why do some people often feel frustrated even though they are capable of doing something? The main reason for it is that they don't have a correct estimate of themselves and of the situation they meet.For example,in the face of the postgraduate entrance examination, some of us tend to overestimate the troubles and give in. They don't understand that all the barries will be broken through only if they make painstaking efforts.
        重点词语和句型:
        striker n. 射门手
        goal-keeper n. 守门员
        It seems to me that... 我觉得 ...
        thought-provoking adj. 发人深省的
        exaggerate(=overestimate,overrate)difficulties 夸大困难
        Without... can't ... 没有...就不能...
        be lacking in ...缺少,缺乏
        lose confidence (=lose heart)丧失信心
        difficulty,trouble,hardship,barrier 困难
        feel fristrated 感到沮丧,感到受挫折
        The main reason for ... is that ... 其主要原因是...
        in the face of 面对
        get over(=overcome)克服
        be capable of doing sth. 有能力做某事
        meet with; be faced with; be confronted with遇到
        tend to (do); be apt to 往往(做)
        give in 投降,让步,认输。
        break through barriers突破障碍
        make painstaking efforts(=spare no pains doing/to do sth;take pains to do sth)做出刻苦努力
        本文框架
        As is depicted by the picture,...
        The picture is really thought-provoking.I think,the drawer intends to tell us that... In my opinion,
        The main reason is that... For example,in the face of ..., some of us tend to
        


        4楼2012-07-06 13:58
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          呼,拿笔记本上自带的键盘打还真费劲


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