= =是一段童话翻译……The Tinder Box
我翻译的名字是《打火盒》，原版名叫《打火匣》【……貌似没差？
咳咳，就一小段，先上我翻译的，然后原文，然后官方翻译[]
英语渣无下限= =

一个士兵正沿着长长的小路迈着军步—— 一二一，一二一！他背着个大背包，腰间佩了把剑，正从战争的硝烟里走出来并踏上了回家的旅程。在这条路上他竟是遇见了一个年迈的巫女，长相独特，下嘴唇一直垂到了她的胸膛。她说：“晚上好，士兵。你的剑和背包看上去是那么完美与你相称，你真是个地道的士兵啊！这样的话，我想你会拥有很多金子的，无论多少。”
“感谢您，尊敬的巫女阁下！”士兵答道。


【原文】
A soldier came marching along the high road: “Left, right—left, right.” He had his knapsack on his back, and a sword at his side; he had been to the wars, and was now returning home.
As he walked on, he met a very frightful-looking old witch in the road. Her under-lip hung quite down on her breast, and she stopped and said, “Good evening, soldier; you have a very fine sword, and a large knapsack, and you are a real soldier; so you shall have as much money as ever you like.”
“Thank you, old witch,” said the soldier.


= =我错了上面那个不是原文

= =无节操一个一个都篡改原文【……搓表示网上的和原文比照改了几个词儿
不管了OTZ的我来放官方【……】翻译
公路上有一个兵在开步走——一，二！一，二！他背着一个行军袋，腰间挂着一把长剑
，因为他已经参加过好几次战争，现在要回家去。他在路上碰见一个老巫婆；她是一个非常
可憎的人物，她的下嘴唇垂到她的奶上。她说：“晚安，兵士！你的剑真好，你的行军袋真
大，你真是一个不折不扣的兵士！现在你喜欢要有多少钱就可以有多少钱了。”
“谢谢你，老巫婆！”兵士说。


【对照吐槽】
：咳咳breast也有胸膛的意思我翻译总不能不文雅吧= =
：he had been to the wars是说他参加过好几次战争……好吧我理解成了这货刚打仗回来[]
：原著上形容那个老巫女【……巫婆什么的好粗鄙的感觉= =】有一句，she was very hideous，这个词儿根据牛津解释大概就是面目可憎面相丑陋这俩意思，于是我说成面目独特算是委婉说法吧？【……啊喂！
：knapsack是就用法就是指大背包= =我错了士兵背的不是行军袋是啥【？】
：原文说的是you are a propper soldier，嗯的确不折不扣比地道好多了【点头
：我总觉得夸他的剑锋利行军袋巨大很奇怪诶= =果然英语的世界我不懂【……
：Now you shall have as much money as you like to have.= =这句话表示果然忘了shall的用法于是翻译错误，我记得似乎shall有个意思是有主观色彩在里面【？】，情态动词去屎吧= =

吐槽很有趣.