知道写的不好啦，哥哥姐姐帮帮忙，谢谢啦！
【我是一枚小学渣==】

木人理我么。。

同初二！

赶脚比我写的好多了

想帮你指出来吧，又怕指错了

strong是形容词

不知道

You shouldnt use ˊand thenˊ to start a sentence
Is there a word limit for your book report

好厉害

这个比较大点

草草帮你改一下，希望帮到你喔：)
Thought After Reading Aladdin and the Magic Lamp Aladdin is a lazy boy. His father dead when he was small. One day,Aladdin met an evil magician who attempted to take advantage of him so as to obtain the magic lamp. However, by Aladdin's wisdom and bravery, he could finally get rid of that evil magician. In the end of the story ,he got married with the princess and lived happily by putting the magic lamp into good use. This story tells us that a greedy person will never become a successful one. Also,we should always stay calm and be brave in the face of adversity.

这是最后的咯

楼主不妨看看楼上的参考啊，现在你看起来应该会觉得好像还不错，但你要一两年后再来看喔，到时候如果你发现到作者当时写作的问题，例如语感不佳，动词残缺，混淆词性，用词不当，too narrow range of vocabulary，句子累赘，文法上的错误，那就恭喜你罗，因为那位作者犯的错是普遍很多初中生的毛病啊，如果你发现到证明你英语能力有进步喔，不过不用担心啦，努力学习，不要骄傲自满，不断改善，慢慢就会好罗

live happily 可以换成 live a happy life...