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我已经发了两次。。又删了两次。。我快吐血了,,发帖真不容易。回贴的吧友们也不容易Q_Q(我真该切腹!!!)
创作背景:苦逼的36班的孩纸被迫运用英语学生用书的重点单词编故事,因为不好意思,所以 没读出来,这回我PO上来!!!括号的为重点单词哦!刚刚有吧友发现利威尔的名字拼错了,非常谢谢,
Long long ago,there was a knight(骑士) named Allen.One day,he arrived at a castle(城堡),which was gorgeous(华丽).Allen imagined that there would be a beautiful princess(公主).However,there was a prince(王子) whose name was Liev.Leiv had a very special feature(特点).He was only 1.6 meters tall !
Leiv related(陈述) his difficulty of being trapped in the castle because of the devil’s incantation(咒语).So Leiv wished Allen to save him by cancling the incantation.
Allen fixed his eyes on Leiv and found Leiv was so lovely that Allen fell in love with him.
Allen asked Leiv:”If I cancle the incantation,will you marry me?”Leiv answered:”Are you serious?!I’m a real man!So I can’t marry you,unless I become a princess!”Leiv emphasized(强调) what he said once again.
Allen went to find the devil with a broken heart.His purpose(目的) was to make the devil relieve magic and change Leiv into a princess.
Eventually,Allen won the battle that he could change Leiv into princess.Certainly,Allen and Leiv fell in love with each other.What’s more,they got married for love,not for money.At last,they had two children,Mikasa and Armin.
Because of the fairytale,the castle was promoted(提升) as a tourist attraction.,,,,,,,END,,,,,,,非常对不起刚刚回那两个旧贴的吧友,真的很对不起,,Q_Q希望不要再次删贴了。。。。。。也许还有些错误,希望不要介意。。


IP属地:广东来自Android客户端1楼2014-01-24 16:47回复
    的确还有错误……【原创】童话
    这样的,


    来自Android客户端2楼2014-01-24 16:49
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      利威尔应该是levi…?楼楼其实不必总是删贴啦QAQ窝觉得看得懂是哪个词就好


      IP属地:上海来自Android客户端4楼2014-01-24 16:51
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        ……好像不可以
        s娘你应该点蜡烛了orz


        IP属地:广西来自Android客户端5楼2014-01-24 16:56
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          哎,,,,,两个人的名字都拼错了,我想切腹,,,,,,,给把刀给我OrzOrz


          IP属地:广东来自Android客户端6楼2014-01-24 17:24
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            我真的又要删帖吗????????天呐!!!!!!!让我死啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊


            IP属地:广东来自Android客户端7楼2014-01-24 17:25
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              英文看的我很想吐血……TAT


              来自Android客户端8楼2014-01-24 17:29
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                不管了,,,希望吧主不要发现我,上中文!!////很久很久以前,有一个叫艾伦的骑士,一天,他来到一个非常华丽的城堡,艾伦猜想里面可能有一个美丽的公主,然而,只有一个叫利威尔的王子,利威尔有一个很特别的特点,他只有一米六!!!利威尔讲述了他的烦恼,他被锁在城堡因为魔王施下了咒语。因此利威尔希望艾伦能帮他解除咒语,艾伦注视着利威尔,发现利威尔超级可爱!以至于他爱上了王子!艾伦问利威尔:“如果我解除了咒语,你可以嫁给我吗?”利威尔回答说:“你是认真的吗?我可是个真正的男人!所以我不可能嫁给你!除非我变成公主!”利威尔再一次强调他说的话。艾伦伤心地去找魔王,他的目的是要让利威尔的咒语解除并让利威尔变成公主!(好腹黑!)最后,艾伦赢得了决斗并把利威尔变成了公主,当然!他们都爱上对方!他们结婚了不是因为金钱,是爱。最后,他们有了两个孩纸,三笠和阿尔敏。因为这个童话,这个城堡成为了一个著名的旅游景点。///END,,, ,


                IP属地:广东来自Android客户端9楼2014-01-24 20:06
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