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呃,英语吧大神求教求教,我的一分钟自我介绍求修改!

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参加的xxx比赛来着,要准备一分钟的自我介绍,第一次写这种东西,然后就是想向大神么请教请教,指出我不对的地方。。。。


IP属地:福建1楼2014-04-07 22:10回复
    二楼我的!


    来自iPhone客户端2楼2014-04-07 22:12
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      Good morning everyone. I am a student from XXXNo.1 middleschool. I feel very glad to attend the competition. My name is XXX,Ehh,it seems that I don’t have an English name. I’d like to tell you it’s thefirst time that I have standed on such a big stage. I haven’t had such a amazingfeeling ,like nervous happy or universal. It’s believed that I used to be avery shy boy . every time I answer the question in my class , my face will turnred and I shall forget what to say ,standing silly. Just like now , I am afraidof forgetting what to say .even though I was shy , I try my best to make morefriends to let me become more confident and outgoing . moreover, I can’texpress myself very well ,so I join in the English club of baidu to improve myoral English on the internet .through the efforts ,I can make myself understood.do you think so ? actually ,although I am a high school student , I sill spendmuch time enjoying something, like reading the news ,watching the movies ortraveling with my father and so on .because I think it is important for us tohold the pulse of the tomes and then broaden our horizon .as the old sayingsgoes “Man who travels far knows more.” Ha, but the competition of society inthe future keeps me occupied with my lessons and homework .All right ,as longas I still have my dream—living in the present.
      And today the talent show I want to show is singing a song .its name is “XXX.” Thankyou.


      IP属地:福建3楼2014-04-07 22:12
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        怎麼不发上来?


        来自iPhone客户端4楼2014-04-07 22:12
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          呃。。。求传阅


          IP属地:福建来自Android客户端5楼2014-04-07 22:17
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