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During the 20th century,contacts between different parts of the world developed quickly,thans to air travel and telecommunication.To what extent do you think societies benefit from the increased contact and closer relationship with foreigners brought by international tourism and business?
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IP属地:北京1楼2014-08-22 12:49回复
    With the rapid development of communication methods and traffic means, the relationships among different areas in the world become more intimate gradually. It is widely acknowledged that the extensive applications of hi-tech products such as the Internet and convenient transportation have a positive effect on increasing connections of the whole society. I believe that this trend is a credible element intending to accelerate the globalization and develop economy.
    It is the faster travel means that allow people to visit other countries, contributing to the communications of different cultures. Travellers return to their hometowns with gaining an understand of the excellent parts of another area and these customs which are worth using for reference are likely to motivate the local development and construction. As for local dwellers, they may be informed about foreign cultures which help them to make a correct decision of where they prefer to live. As long as they tend to move to another area and become migrantes, the society is benefited from the ones who are able to not only stimulate both of the two areas’ consumption but also become the local workforce aiming to relieve the stress of the productivity shortage.
    Comparing with the soaring economy, we should also realise the fact that societies’ safety and stability get an ensurance available due to the majority of citizens’ mental satisfication and comfort. People can travel other countries at an afforable price because of the mounting number of airplanes, thus it offers an appropriate opportunity for visitors to ease their burden from life in overseas journey. Meanwhile, parents can release anxiety about their children who are studying in other countries if they are easily to visit children. These anxious feelings and psychological situations are the primary factors leading to the mess of social order and some domestic violence. In addition, the divorce rate and the frequency of events that children refuse to adopt their old parents will also reduce effectively attributing to the closer contacts between family members. For instance, a friend of mine traveled far from his hometown, his families can gain the latest news of him by the electric device rather than loosing contacts with him.
    In the light of these factors, i believe that it is beneficial to the siciety in various aspects that international tourism and commercial communication have developed. This wholesome consequence will become more distinct in the future, once the degree of globalization will become deeper.


    2楼2014-08-22 22:55
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      来自Android客户端3楼2014-08-23 11:43
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        My friend DouDou is a lovely girl,she has a family inn in Chengdu. Many foreign travelers live together with her in her home.About 20 travelers live in during a month at 2007,and she has to rent out the sofa in her living room.When I first know her,she was a college graduate,she told me nothing is more frustrating than not being able to find a place.But now,but now,she is a busy landlord,and her has a high monthly income.With the emerging of pupular tourism,family inn has been becoming a more and more important role in tourism economy of some parts of our country.Moer and more people benefiting from this.So international tourism is good for increase national income.
        International tourism is good for cultural exchange also.Mr Liu is a guide,he received a lot of foreign tourists to sichuan.Most of them before to sichuan would visit Mr liu*s website first which introduce sichuan culture and attractions.Almost all the foreign tourists will choose to go to the Chengdu Research Base of Giant Panda Breeding,because they have never seen a real panda and think the panda is the symbol of China.And then,Liu will take them tothe sichuan culture such as sichuan opera,sugar-coated figurine,tea culture and The Kingdoms culture.Foreign tourists can travel through multinational to understand the culture of other countries.
        When I go to travel abroad,I can see a lot of unknown things.When I was in Singapore I feel the country*s national quality and beautiful environment,it makes me very comfortable.Hainan chichen rice,of course,also very dilicious if not eat it every day.When I was in Nepal I fond their accent is very peculiar and the streets are everywhere shrines and temples.But the carpet is too expensive although they also accept RMB.By the way,the driver driving here are so great.So what is the third benefit of international tourism?It can see the world to learn moer knowledgy,you will find the beauty of the world.Perhaps you can also meet international love.
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        4楼2014-08-23 12:43
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          来晚了。。。。没有机会了吗!!


          IP属地:山东来自Android客户端7楼2014-08-26 21:27
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