各位大神们给点建议吧，我改了几十次，还是八十来分

八十多不错了

满篇都是good,你就不能换换同义词

unconditionally

assessment to judge a good student?
parents used to judge a good student from the one who are granted for obtaining a good grade and exactly obey their orders whereras nowadays people changed their mind
按照这个重新写

还有楼上几位在逗你呢这篇基本结构有但是不会高于50分/100

杨阳课上的吧, 你是哪位？

Changing Criteria for Judging Good Students
A good student should have excellent grades in the school and obey their parents* order unconditionally , that*s their standard for judging a good student in the past. With the development of the times, people*s criteria for judging good students have changed.
First of all, good grades is insufficient for an outstanding student. They should be independent, and they are also supposed to do the housework, which includes cooking.Secondly, a good student should dare to question, they ought to know how to tell the truths from the lies, but not just listen and do what they are told. Finally, a good student should keep their mind clear at anytime, and make the right decisions when facing the different conditions.
There is no doubt that these changes is beneficial, which means we students should master more skills and have to take more exercises to strengthen our abilities to fit the changing world. It*s good for our future.

i第1段
重复 "people*s criteria for judging good students" 严重不地道；
"with the development of the times," 烂话类， 别说了

看这，看这，嘿嘿，我只是来拿经验的，拿完就走。^o^^o^

[]发图也会涨经验呦
[]这是真的吗
[]不会是度娘骗我玩的吧
[]度娘你要是骗我就太没节操了吧
[]坑爹啊这是
[]还好事前试了下插图片真的好多经验啊
[]拿到经验的一刹那，整个人都嗨翻了。
[]大家都来试试哦自从有了小尾巴，人人叫我活雷锋
　　　

A good student have。。。一点也没档次，口语可以。
换成 X is qualified for Y ，
动词选不好句子就完蛋了

句子骨干部分 要精选，附属部分可忽悠、模糊点。
啥是句子骨干部分？
有人写的汤水不漏，附属部分也精选，TMD，我难做到！

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