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英语学渣,几篇作文,要考试了,请大家帮忙看看有没有问题,谢谢

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1楼2014-11-08 11:32回复
    My friend
    I have a good friend. Her name is May. She is12 years old. Her telephone number is87634966.Her birthday is March 5th. She is good at English and Chinese. Sheoften plays the piano. She likes reading books and listening to the music. Herhobbies are reading and listening to music. She is a nice girl. We often helpeach other. We are good friends.
    谢谢大家了啊


    2楼2014-11-08 11:33
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      Myfamily
      Look! This is my family photo. This is my grandmother. She is58. This is my father. He is a teacher. He is 36. And my mother is 36,too. Who’s that boy? Oh, he is my brother. He is 13 and I am 12. Mybrother and I are students.
      有错误的话回复我好吗?谢谢了


      3楼2014-11-08 11:33
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        sMyname is Christina
        Hello! My name is Christina. My first name is Christina, andmy last name is Wang. My phone number is 123456789. I have a good friend. Sheis my new friend. Her first name is Cindy. Her last name is Fan. Bob is myfriend, too. His first name is Bob. His last name is Wang.
        谢谢了,英语太渣不敢保证正确率,又要期中考试了,大家帮忙看一下


        4楼2014-11-08 11:34
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          帮忙的我都粉了,谢谢大家啊,要考试了,作文没把握,谢谢大家了


          5楼2014-11-08 11:35
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            不要沉不要沉不要沉


            6楼2014-11-08 11:35
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              求帮忙啊


              7楼2014-11-08 11:35
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                谢回啊


                8楼2014-11-08 11:36
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                  求帮忙,谢谢了,真的


                  9楼2014-11-08 11:36
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                    play piano 没有the


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