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《Key to yesterday》召唤玥星姐,求检查作业> < ……【并不

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人这么少不科学!!←这是我本来的帖子标题,后来觉得太水了……不好意思发……
正好今天新写了一首英文词……如果不打扰的话,求玥星姐帮忙瞅一眼可以不咯……帮我检查一下有没有语法错误什么的捂脸_(:з」∠)_……
《Key to yesterday》
原曲:信《朋友的诗》
填词:colorshake
Once I met with angels who sang for me a silent song
(曾经,天使降临我侧,为我轻咏寂静之歌)
Then they melted just like morning fog
(随即他们融化恰如晨雾蒸发)
I wake up looking at the mirror,at a loss,in a daze
(留我梦醒对镜,惘然失语)
End all stories with a sign
(以叹息写尽故事结局)
We all feel the river of time goes by
(俱遭逝者如斯,浮沉)
No one can escape and be a Peter Pan
(无人可出离,看永世风景)
"Don't be afraid",you said it with a smile
(“不要怕”,你曾笑着慰我)
Then we finally became two parallel
(可最终还是,渐行渐远,被时光冲散)
Listen to the wind,blew in memory
(听风吹透记忆)
Burning in my heart,the flame hasn't die
(我心尚燃,不熄荒火)
Try to catch the rain,and warm up dreams with wine of sky at night
(踮脚捉夜雨,烫这天空之酒以暖梦)
Although the empty still hold my breath now and then
(尽管空虚还常摄住我的呼吸)
People turns away one by one without even a goodbye
(人们陆续退场,甚至来不及谢幕)
Left me alone with tears dried
(独剩泪痕已干的我)
Listen to the wind,blew in memory
(听风吹透记忆)
Burning in my heart,the flame hasn't die
(我心尚燃,不熄荒火)
Try to catch the rain,and warm up dreams with wine of sky at night
(踮脚捉夜雨,烫这天空之酒以暖梦)
Although the empty still hold my breath now and then
(尽管空虚还常摄住我的呼吸)
Key to yesterday,go back to the young age
(开启昨日之匙,逆回当时年少)
Hold you within,through silence all these years
(拥你入怀,蹚过这些年的寂静)
Key to yesterday,hold all your white lies like a guiding star
(开启昨日之匙,举你所有成谎的誓为星辰)
Just laugh like the daybreak will never come
(对视而笑,好像长梦可驻)
Just laugh like two kids till tears roll down my cheek
(对视而笑,如稚童放纵,直到泪湿面颊)
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谢谢_(:з」∠)_……


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    弱弱地@伊德娜典 ……


    IP属地:加拿大2楼2015-01-28 22:49
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      sigh 和 emptiness


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