My brain is full of marvelous fantasy about the future,but above all,one thing I do believe is that success isn't about being in the right place at the right time,it's about creating and achieving.Competitions of science give me a logical mind,reading broadens my horizons and fills my heart.And I think what I'm doing now enhances my ability and courage.

在线等。。。。

别沉啊

楼主头像是我gc男神！！！

没人吗...

有错误哎！

后面的看不见了。。（我不是大神）

比如说第一段第六行后面已经用了过去时，前面应该也要用过去时。应该改成got比较好

Hello everyone,my name is Muriel.I'm 16 years old.It's an honor for me to be here talking to you.
Born and raised in a small city, I knew little about the outside world.But when I get older,I became amazed at how magnificent it is and how diverse its cultures can be.I was eager to embrace it,the first step of which is to build the bond between us.That is, through English.
My brain is full of marvelous fantasies about the future. Above all,one thing I do believe is that success isn't about being in the right place at the right time,it's about creating and achieving.Science gives me a logical mind, and reading broadens my horizons and fills my heart. And I think what I'm doing now enhances my ability and courage.

忘记贴吧有读贴功能了么

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表沉

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