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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or a new country because we may lose our old social connection.
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1楼2017-03-27 13:34回复
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    I disagree with statement-----we may lose some acquaintances but will not lose friends.----the benefit about going to a new place----sum up
    When it comes to the case that people leave their hometown to another place, people always discuss whether the old social connection will fade away or not. Some people insist that the old social connection will disappear together with the memories about the person who left.However, as far as I concerned, move to a new place is a wonderful opportunity for people.
    The one reason why I disagree with it is that though you may lose some nodding acquaintances, it’s impossible to lose someone who called friend easily. For instance, my cousin called Judy has a close friend whom studies out of province, even they meet each other just in vacation, Judy still get along well with her friend like they met yesterday. And even the relationship is not very intimate, you can also chat with them by phone or the software like Facebook and WeChat.
    The main reason that can support my point is move to a new town or a new country will make you fell a new world.Take myself for example, I lived in China about eighteen years, last year, I came to Canada together with my families. I felt a different ambience between China and Canada and saw so many kinds of culture here. In my opinion, I’m so lucky that I can move to a new country. It not only wide my horizon and rich my knowledge, but also let me have a opportunity that make new friends in a country far away from my hometown and become more attractive.
    To sum up, I disagree with the statement which thoughts move to a new place isn’t a good thing just because we may lose our old social connection. We may easily draw a conclusion that It’s favorable for people to move to a new place is more logical.


    IP属地:加拿大2楼2017-03-28 14:17
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      Outline:
      Disagree
      1. Concession:the true possibility; not a trouble
      2. Lose some connection doesn’t matter. Loss of unimportant ones and gain new ones
      3. Moving has its advantages
      Summary: wrong logic to draw
      In the age of globalization,frequent migrations occur from towns to towns, countries to countries. Along with the phenomenon arise new concerns. Losing old social connections is one of these worries. As a consequent, argument that it is not a good thing to move to a new country or town because of the chances of lossing old connection comes into the public’s sight. However, I think the statement is ridiculous for the following reasons.
      There’s no denying the fact that people changing their address face with risks of losing old social connections if. To be exact, they leave their old neighborhood where they used to have a bunch of friends with whom they may convene on a regular basis and have a heartily party. While after moving to a new country, they can’t meet them that often. And time may dilute their friendship. In spite of this, the relationship that pales, as far as I am concerned, is not of so much importance. With regard to the connection that really matters, people can still have steady contact since there are other convenient ways to connect, such as through emails or chatting platform on the Internet.
      What’s more, it does not matter much to lose some old connection caused by moving house. For one thing,as is mentioned before, loss of unnecessary connections poses no harm to one’s social circle. Recall those plain servants of a coffee bar which one often visits, the grocer in the nearby grocery store and the pupils livingdownstairs whom one sometimes plays with. These relationships are so subtle that people seldom pay attention to and may quickly be forgotten as long as people get into doing other stuff. For another, settling down in a newneighborhood can create new connections. Since ones have to know new people and make new friends if they wants to fit oneself in a new surroundings, new relationships will be established. To be specific, a new job relates people to their new bosses and colleagues and a new community consisting neighbors who can complement the sense of loss of some old friends. In view of the fact that some vital old relationships still remains, ones virtually have enlarge their social circle. Given that, there is no need to worry about the slight loss of the old connections.
      Last but not least, it has its advantages to move to a new place. Moving to a new environment provides people with opportunities to experience different cultures and hence enrich their knowledge and widen their horizon. In comparison, if people keep living in the same place, their knowledge may be constricted to a particular culture, which may cause them to be conventional. For instance, my mother used to live in a village for around 20 years. She told me that she didn’t know the existence of bicycle that time since her village was quite small and no one needed such a vehicle. However, after graduating from university, she chose to live in the city where she had experienced something new and were attracted by urban cultures.
      To sum up, it takes no responsibility to launch the statement that it is not a good thing to move to a new place because people may lose old connections. As is stated above, it is not necessarily bad to lose old connection caused by moving and one can’t draw the conclusion to judge a matter just through one subtle seemingly plausible reason but through more aspects in which way I deduce that it could be a good thing to move.


      5楼2017-03-29 15:50
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        微信号 honlobn

        Some people claim that it is often not agood thing for people to move to a new town or a new country because we maylose our social connection. For example, it’s not as easy as before for peopleto get access to their friends due to the long distance. This argument seemsplausible. However, I strongly disagree with this statement for the followingreasons.
        Admittedly, it’s true that people can’thang out with their friends easily like before. This is because they areblocked by the transportation and communication. Moreover, people are far awayfrom the old community which they were familiar with, followed by the lonenessand anxiety. To be specific, it is really hard for people to abandon theirpast. For instance, my grandfather served in army when he was young. But afterhe returned back home, he dislikes the decent life because he had got used tothe tough life in army, which he memories a lot.
        However, even though people are away fromtheir friends, it’s quite easy to keep touch with them due to the fastdevelopment of technology and infrastructure. For instance, not all the peoplefrom my class study in a single city, which means it’s really hard for us tocommunicate. But actually we use smart phones or Skype to chat through theinternet. We sometimes hold an online meeting or chatting, which is reallyconvenient for most of us even though we live separately. That is to say,modern communication tools can help people keep connection easily. Also, thehigh speed train allows people to get access to people from old community mucheasier before. To be specific, the development of transportation shortens thelong distance of journey. For example, my grandfather sometimes goes back toarmy to see his friends by high speed train, which is really convenient becauseit doesn’t have traffic congestion problem. Furthermore, their friendshipimproves because they really treasure the limited meetings. In conclusion, it’snot easy for people to lose social connection due to the development oftechnology as well as infrastructure.
        On the other hand, moving to a new placecan enable people to make new friends. To be specific, it’s human nature tomeeting people new when he moves to a new environment. For instance, I’m bornin a small city and later go to another big city for studying. At first Ireally miss my friends but later I do know some interesting guys. They arereally friendly and we develop the friendship. In addition, it’s really a newstart for those who move to a new place. This is they own the right to abandonpast and lead a new life. For instance, my friend Leo suffered a lot during hischildhood because his dad passed away early. Sometimes people may feelsurprised at it, making him really worried and nervous. But after he moves toanother city, he feels more confident and determinant because nobody knowsabout his experience. Therefore his life begins to be positive.
        Needless to say, although moving to a newplace could bring some problems, they are able to be solved eventually. Theadvantages of moving overweigh these problems by all means. Therefore, it isalways a good thing for people to move to a new town or a new country.


        IP属地:上海6楼2017-03-29 20:07
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          WeChat ID: afualpha
          提纲:
          Disagree.
          1. With the help of the modern technology, we can keepin touch with others easily when we move to a new place.
          2. We can make new friends and extend our socialconnection in the new city.
          3. People born in rural area or a small town cangain a better education, job or medical treatment by moving to a big developedcity, the life in a developed city will be much more convenient.
          Some people believe that when we move to anew environment, such as a new city or even a new country, we may lose our oldfriends and social connection, which will make our life worse than before. LikeChinese people has a folk custom psychology of living-and-working in one’shometown, rather than to a big city with a better job. But I disagree withthat. I think it is the 21th century now and the science and technology aremuch more developed than before. Also, there are some reasons to support thatmoving to a new place is not a bad thing.
          First, with the help of themodern technology, we can keep in touch with others easily when we move to anew place. In the last few decades, more and more applications andtools came out to assist us to contact with faraway friends. We can make aphone call, text a message and chat through WhatsApp or even make a video callthrough Skype or Facetime whenever we want, which not only allows us to hear theirvoice but also enables us to communicate face-to-face, just like what we willdo when we sit together. Facebook and Twitter also make it possible for us tofollow up with newest things happened around our friends, even we are indifferent country. Take myself as an example, my university locates hundreds ofmiles away from my hometown, but I can make several video calls to my parentsevery week and chat with my friends who are studying abroad through WeChat, aChinese social application. So, it is impossible to make a big different becauseof moving to another place if you do not want to, not to mention lose our oldfriends just because the distance.
          Second, we can makenew friends and extend our social connection in the new city. As we live inthe new place, we are supposed to get a new job and make some new friendsthere, we can build up a new social connection there, we are able to know moreabout the local culture and history by communicate with local people. Nowadays,people always stay in their comfort zone and do not want to break it through,which is the actually obstacle for them to hold their social circle. We should notstay in one place in case of lose our social connection, in contrast, we needto update it constantly. Actually, more and more students decided to have a gapyear after graduate from the high school or before they first enter the society,taking some part-time job or visiting some different countries, because theyknow that only after they go out of their comfort zones, only after they knowmore about the world they live can they know what they really want to be. By havingthis kind of gap year, they can not only widen their horizons, but also broadentheir spectrum of personal and professional relationships. The society is alive,so we do not need to cling it to the old place, we should let it grow.
          Third, people born in ruralarea or a small town can gain a better education, job or medical treatment bymoving to a big developed city, the life in a developed city will be much more convenient.This is much simpler to describe. Because big cities, like New York, LosAngeles and Boston, have more universities and big companies and also have morewell-equipped hospitals. Big cities mean more resource, more opportunity andmore challenge. We can meet people from different country, speaking differentlanguages here, which of course can bring us some new social connection. Livingin such a city will not be a bad thing.
          So, all in all, if you really want to moveto another city, it is definitely not a bad thing. Since we can live a moreconvenient lives while keeping in touch with our old friends by the moderntechnology and meeting new people, our lives will not be worse after moving toa new place.


          7楼2017-03-29 22:27
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            不同意
            有人认为这样不好因为距离远了就会因为不一样的经历 而产生分歧 从而疏远; 真正的朋友是那群价值观一样的人 不会因为距离的疏远而失去;
            科学技术很发达,人们可以随时随地联系到对;
            不但不会失去友谊还有利于增进感情;
            更有利于自己的发展
            withthe development of the society, more and more people choose to moveout the place they have ever lived and start a new life in adifferent place. Some people concerned that this is not good forpeople to maintain their old friendship, because long distance maycause barrier among people. While, I hold an opposite opinion aboutthis, because true friendship should not be tested by distance.
            Firstand foremost, what are true friends? True friends are a group ofpeople who have same value towards the world. They are connected bythe hart distance but not the space. Thus friendship will not be lostbecause of the movement of people. Moreover, we are living in thesociety which as a very developed technology, and it can offer uschances to connect with each other no matter when and where. Forexample, I am living in America, while most of my friends are livingin China. We still keep a very close relationship with each otherregardless of distance and time difference, because we can touch witheach other due to high technologies, like smart phones, internets. Wecan chat for several hours to share our happy time and depression,just like we live together as before. For those who are just ordinaryfriends, I still can keep touch with them by internet, and we neverlose our connection.
            Secondly,long distance won’t not only let us lose old social connection, butalso help us closer our relationships. Moving to a new place, peoplecan know more new things which are cannot be obtained in old livingplace. For instance, people can learn new culture, and this can be aknowledge to pass to the old friends. Take myself as an example,every time I chat with my friends in china, I tell them about what Ilearn, what I saw in America, and they are interested in what arehappening in the outside world. We exchange our idea about the topic,and encourage each other to make a good life in the place we arestaying.
            Lastbut not the least, choosing to move out of the place where we live, we canget chance to broaden our horizon and improve ourselves. Every thingsare different in the new place from where we lived before. We learnhow to match with the new culture, how to communicate with people inthe unfamiliar circumstance, we even have to learn a total newlanguage in new environment. All of these push us to get use to themimmediately. And during the process, we can improve ourselves to ahigh point. While, we may stay in a same stage if we live in oneplace the whole life.
            Toconclude, living in one place is good enough, because we have somemuch love hear, of courses our old social circle. However, choosingto live in another place will make a better influence on our life,and what we concerned more, social circle, will still be with us.


            8楼2017-03-30 03:45
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              Rainwcs Outline:
              disagree.
              1. 搬到新地方是好事,可以开阔视野,增长见识。
              2. 搬到新地方不会失去old socialconnection,只要与老圈子保证足够的联系就好了。
              3. 搬到新地方确实会与老朋友减少一定的联系,但是我们要做的是给予适当的关心和问候,这样也不会真正失去他们。
              Currently, there is a widespread belief that moving to new town or a newcountry can be an eye-opening experience. But does it have any negative effectson our life? Could it be harmful to our old social connection? From myperspective, moving to a new place is a good thing and it can't result inlosing our old social connection if we are careful of it.
              In the first place, joining a new environment can provide us with morechances to experience new life. It's a good way for us to enjoy differentviews, such as high mountains, romantic beaches, even the sunset, which can beextremely distinct with old place. Moreover, in a new place, we can have theopportunities to appreciate the local culture, language and cuisine that can beamazing experiences. Therefore, moving to new place can be of greatsignificance to broaden our horizons and enlarge our knowledge. In this sense,it is a obviously good thing.
              In addition, when we move to a new place, as long as we keep in touch withour old friends or colleagues, we cannot lose the old social connection. Withthe advent of internet and with the development of technology, it is much moreconvenient to contact others from remote distance than before. For example, Iam often talking with my friends who are studying in America now through theinternet, and we often keep in touch by various softwares, such as Skype,Facebook and Twitter and so on. Accordingly, we can have a clear idea of ourlife and keep good feelings with each other. Therefore, due to advancedcellphones and computers, there is no need to worry that we will lose theconnection with old social circles.
              Admittedly, after moving to a new place, we may reduce some time spent oncaring for old friends and lack some opportunities to share happiness andsorrow with each other face to face. However, as an old saying goes, goodfriends will always stay the same as long as they put each other into heart. Itseems clear to us that no matter where we are, what we should do is learn tocare more for others, like old friends. Only in this way can we never lose theold social connections.
              In conclusion, moving to a new place is a good thing to open up our eyesand we don't need to be afraid of losing old social connections if we do ourbest to care for them as much as possible.


              9楼2017-03-30 20:38
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                题纲:不同意题目的陈述
                理由如下:1,搬去新的地方不一定会丢失旧的社会关系
                2,丢失旧的社会关系不一定是一件坏事
                3,不能因为有可能会丢失旧的社会关系就停留在旧的地方
                When it comes to the issue about moving toa new town or a new country, people’s opinion differs from person to person.Some prefer to move to a new place, while others may choose to live with theirold social on the contrary. On personal level, I support the prior one forreasons of moving to a new place and build a new social connection.
                First, It’s true that when we move to a newplace, we will not be family with the old people and the old thing compared tothe past. Sometimes we will see our old friend once time in a year even manyyears. But that doesn’t mean we will lost the old social connection. All of usshould know that a good connection is not just prompted by facing with otherseveryday. For example, when I come to university, I come home just a few timesin a year. However, when I arrive at home, I always have a warmth felling in myfamily and I also can talk a lot with my friends. So when we come to a newplace, that doesn’t mean we will lost the old social connection. Besides, withthe advanced technology, we are very easily to talk with our family and friend.The distance between we and our old social connection isn’t long as we thought.
                However, there still have some peopleworried that when they come to a new place, it’s a bad thing for them if theylost their old connection. I agree that sometimes we will lost our oldconnection. But I don’t think it must a bad thing.
                We spend a lot of time to develop a socialconnection because we need it to help us to live a better life no matter whatin substance or spiritual. However, it also will bind us in a fixed circumstance.For instance, a doctor may just have a good connection with his colleague. A professormay just family with the things in university. So when we come to a new place,it’s not a bad thing. Because that means we will have more opportunities totouch with new things and make new friends which is benefit for broadening our horizons.
                In addition, a people shouldn’t stop hisfeet just because he afraid of losing the
                Old connection. When we grow up, we mustface new life, new place and new connection. It is necessary for us having thecourage to build a new connection and lose the old connection. If we don’t havethe little courage, we will not have a wonderful life. It’s must a pity when weare old for we don’t the courage to moving to a place and accept new thing. Forexample, when I was in high school,
                I just want to have a good grade to enter agood university learning more knowledge and have a more wide world. Sometimeswe must choose what we want and if we want a better life, we must overcome theafraid losing the old connection.
                In short, from what has been discussedabove, we may safely draw the conclusion that it is not a bad thing for us tomove to a new place. We need not worry about much for losing the oldconnection. When we move to a new place, we will get more things.


                IP属地:英国15楼2017-04-01 15:42
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                  wechat 凌霄百尺
                  Outline: disagree - 1 we will not lose our old connection for we can contact with our friends easily thanks to the new technologies 2 people can be benefit from moving to a new place
                  Rather than live in one place for the entire life, people nowadays get much more chances to move to a new town or a new country due to the fast pace of globalization and modernization. Some people may think such kind of changes is not good because they are afraid of losing former social connections. But I can hardly agree with this opinion.
                  Indeed, moving to a different place means you have to say goodby to your close friends, neighbors, and family members. You have little chance to hang out together, enjoy dinner together, or go for a camp on weekends.However, this doesn’t mean you lose your dear friends but only means you need to communicate with them in a different way. Thanks to the developing of electronic technology, internet and social media, now people from all around the world can contact with each other easily by just tapping on the screen of their smart phone and iPad. People can share their emotion - happiness, sadness, upset, anxious by publish a twitter or updating status on Facebook. Photos and videos on WeChat help us to know the latest news of our friends — Li is surfing in Bali Island, Chen has just broke up with his girlfriend etc. Whenever you need to talk, use the video call with your best friend, then you can see her facial expression and have eye contact with her which just like you are sitting next to each other on the sofa in your room although there may be thousands of miles between you.
                  Besides, people may be benefited by moving to a different city or country. If you move to metropolis like Beijing,Shanghai from a small town, you can get much more job opportunities, better payment, enjoy world top medical condition and your child will get better education. You can watch top-level show,Opera in the theater and most famous works of great artiests in the museum. On the controry, if you move to a small town you may be delighted to find out that life canbe so quiet peace and slow.You don't need to rush in to the crowded public transportations and spend hours on the way to work everyday. The air is fresh and clean without the traffic. To sum up, do not let the fear of losing old connection be the obstacle to your opportinity to move to an new place.You may gain much more without losing anything.


                  17楼2017-04-01 20:57
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                    提纲:赞同
                    1.旧的与新的对比,突出旧的优势,新的劣势
                    2.举一个例子
                    3.总结,简单重复自己的观点
                    Rencently, there is a big debate on the issuse that moving to a new town or a new country is often not a good thing or not. Because we may lose our old social connection. For my prespective, moving to a new town or a new country is often not a good thing. In the following, i will illustrate my opinion.
                    Naturally, I donnot believe it is necessary to change a new place for development or something else. Cause our hometown is beautiful and developing. My best friends are there and we get along well with our neighbours. we help each other from time to time. We had a ball!
                    On the contrary, moving to a new town or country. Actually, you really can get a prosper environment and a better education. Even more you can connect your friends by convenient phones or chatting platforms, such as Wechat, Facebook. But your friendship of hometown may be get worst and worst.
                    Take me as an example, when I was 14 years old, I moved from my grandma hometown to my parents working city for a further education. Moving to a new city was difficult for me, especially, I am a stranger in a strang place. Altough I could make new friends and start a challenge life, I still feel lonely. I just miss home , I really miss home, the old houses and the rivers. But more than Jmm, my best friend. We always played together. Neverthless, we still pay much attention on study, for it's our priority. When she heard me that I was about to leaving to a new city. She and me cried heavily, both of us were refuse to take apart. In fact, it is ridicurious and in vain. Eventually, I left. Though we left each other telephone number, in the begnning, we contact each other more often. Sometimes, we have little troubles but we cannot face to face to deal with well. As time went by, we were changed. However, easy to get together, as early as too difficult.
                    In conclusion, I agree on the statement. Although people have to move a new place for development, that takes it for granted. Follow the heart, hometown is also a good place to develop, what's more,we can saty with our acquainces. We are family!


                    19楼2017-04-01 21:42
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                      ID:Qiuqinmi888
                      Question:
                      Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or a new country because we may lose our old social connection.
                      提纲:不同意
                      1.首先我们没有丢失以前的社会联系
                      (1)通讯发达 交通便利
                      2.其次就算我们丢失了老朋友,也不一定是坏事。
                      (1)可以使我们交到更多的新朋友
                      (2)让我们有一次重新开始的机会
                      Nowadays, people are willing to leave their hometown for other regions to seek for something, such as fortune, opportunities, people. But some people hold the view that since people are likely to lose their friends, relatives, colleagues, moving to a new region is not a wonderful things. I totally disagree with this view.
                      On one hand, people who move to a new town or country don’t lose their social relationship. With the growing power of economy and technology, method of communication and transportation has changed a lot. In the past, people may need several days and even months to communicate with people living in other town or country by mail. But now, people are able to communicate with other town or country’s people directly by Skype, which is of importance to establish a solid relationship with people who don’t live in the same town or country. For example, my friend Amy moved to Beijing last year. However, we stil keep in contact with each other everyday by using social media and are close friends.
                      On the other hand, even though people may lose their social relationship, it does good to them.
                      Firstly, old social connection leads to the results that people do not adapt to the new environment. In the new and unfamiliar environment, they may concentrate on being in contact with old friends instead of making new friends. Provided that a person was satisfied with owning old social relationship, he or she would not be willing to make new friends and start their new life. But if one day, his or her friends became distant, he or she would realize he or she needs new friends, which is essential for he or she to adapt to the new environment.
                      Secondly, without a social relationship, people can own an opportunity to start a different life. In this new town, no one knew them before. People who move to a new town and country are able to start a completely new life. People who live in a new town and a new country will just judge a newcomer by their own behavior rather than other factors. While in the old town, people have lived with each other for long time. A person knows other persons firstly maybe by communication with his or her friends. It means that their friends, relatives, colleagues and other persons’ thought can affect them in some degree. While in the new town, people who move to there recently are able to make friends simply because of their interests, characters, hobbies.
                      In conclusion, this statement is totally wrong. First, people are not likely to lose social connection. Second, even though they do lose, it doesn’t a bad thing.
                       


                      来自iPhone客户端20楼2017-04-01 23:03
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                        yeahkaty提纲:肯定,
                        原因 搬去新城市会失去朋友
                        因果 搬去新城市因为失去朋友是一件坏事。
                        结果 搬去新城市是一件坏事
                        “I want to move to a new city or new countryand live a new life” is one of the most common thoughts that pop into themodern people’s mind, but few of them take actual action, because they wouldknow that change always comes with consequences, when they have a secondthought. In fact, it’s not a good thing to do to move to a new place because ofthe loss of the old friends.
                        Firstly, it’s highly possible that people will lose their old friends, when they are nolonger in the same place with them. For one thing, they will meet their friends a lot less than before, because they or their friends cannot afford the time and money to come to another cities and countries very often. For another,people would gradually lose common topics with their friends and thus stop contacting them, even though they can communicate through phones and e-mails. When people still live in the same city with their friends, they can talk about the new restaurant that just open in the city, the new plays that come on in thetheater, the party hold by their common friends and so on. But once these overlapping of people and their friends’ life disappear, it is no longer fun to talk about or listen any more. That’s why it is hard to keep a long-distancerelationship alive.
                        Secondly, the loss of old friends would make people’s life in the new city bad. Certainly,people can pick up new friends in many ways, joining the local sport club,attending the parties, and meeting people in the new workplace, but people will find it almost impossible to ever have friends to know them so well and understand them as their old friends do. It is very common that people grow too suspicious to open up their heart to others along with ages. When two peopleare both hiding things from each others, they certainly cannot become true friends. So people will feel insecure and alone in the new living place. Theydo not who to trust and have no one to turn to when they meet problem, which will bring extra stress in their life.
                        Thirdly, moving to a new city is not a smart thing to do. People can feel overwhelmed by many tricky issues. New city or country also means new job, now neighborhood, newschools for kids, even new language, new thinking style, and new custom. Therelie the possibilities that people don’t like the style of their new boss, one neighbormight be loud at night, and the children cannot catch up with the new class. It’s not wise to risk these dangers and go through many troubles to move to a new place, especially they have no friends around to help them.
                        All in all, when people move to a new city, they have many things to adjust themselves in. It’s not a good thing to do, since they would lose their old friends, who helped them to overcome the difficulties in their life.


                        IP属地:上海27楼2017-04-02 17:04
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                          1. 现在的通讯和交通如此发达,我们搬到新的地方不会与老朋友失去联系。
                          2. 即使搬到新的地方与老朋友失去联系了,搬到新的地方也不是一件坏事情,因为我们会结交新的朋友
                          3. 新地方可以生活的更舒适,因为我们是为了追求多的工作机会或者舒适的生活环境搬到新城市的。
                          According to a piece of news reported by China Daily, with the development of society, people tend to move to new cities now because of work opportunities and pursuit of comfortable life. This leads to an intense discussion among people. While some people claim that moving to new places loses people’s old friends, I believe it is benefit for people to live in new environment.
                          First of all, because of advanced communication technology, people are capable of keeping old relations.Nowadays, rapid development of communication technology and applications offer us the ability to connect friends living far away. For example, it is easy to have a face-to-face chatting with friends thousand miles away through Wechat,which is a prevalent application. And with the function of sending voice message, we can always exchange our ideas and share interesting things with each other. Even when we live in the same city, busy work and life staffs prevent us from gathering together for a dinner. As a result, moving to newplaces is unable to destroy the relations with old friends.
                          What’s more, even though we may lose old relations after making a move to different cities, it is not a bad thing because new relations will be formed in the new places. A new city provides us with new neighbors, new colleagues, and completely new environment, possessing opportunities to meet unacquainted people with different background during off-work time. New relations are capable of motivating people to be positive. Fresh feelings with new friends enable people to burst some special ideas that hardly appear in an invariable place. In other words, new relations can make people think differently and have a positive attitude. In this sense, making a move to newcities benefit people a lot.
                          Last but not least, people can live a more comfortable life in new cities. Mostly people choose to move because new cities have more job opportunities or have an excellent environment that is suitable for people to live in. If people have more job opportunities to choose, it is more possible for people to choose an appropriate job, which may have high-salary or enough free time. So they can live in the styles they like.While if people choose to live in a city with a high-quality environment, their happiness will rise up sharply. Fresh air and plenty of green belts bring comfortable life to them. No matter more job opportunities or a better environment can make people live a more comfortable life in new cites.
                          From all the reasons discussed above,moving to a new place brings benefits, such as new relations and a more comfortable life, to people. As a result, it is a good thing to move to new places.


                          33楼2017-04-03 00:08
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