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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to young people than to older people.
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1楼2017-05-15 08:21回复
    思路:agree
    1. 年轻人对于生活的经验少,所以他们更需要建议
    2. 很多年轻人有自己的偶像,偶像的建议和意见对年轻人来说特别重要
    3. 对于老年人来说也很重要,他们是时代的潮流,可以更新老人的思想
    With thedevelopment of our society, more and more celebrities were become famous. Theywere known by a lot of people include young people and old people. They alwaystalk about themselves story or opinion on TV show. And some people think thattheir perspective are more important to young people than to older people. But othersdid not support that. In my opinion, celebrities’ opinion will also influenceolder people, however young people were influence by them more.
    Young adult haveless experience about life, so they need more advice. Compare with olderpeople, young people live for short time. They did not have many chance tolearn about life. It is different in older people. They go through plentythings, so they can conclude life experience. If young people want to improvequickly, they need learn from another people. As the result, the celebritiesare some famous people whose opinion will be public in the show. So youngpeople will easy be influence by them. For example, no matter in the book or onthe TV show, some famous people’s opinion always been said once and once again.Old people always have known about it, so when they find this experience theyalready have, they will not continue to think about it. However, young peoplealways did not have their own perspective, so they will easy to aspect the newidea. That is why young people will easy been influenced by famous people.
    Nowadays, most youngpeople have their own idol which is a singer or an actor. So their behaver isimportant for those people. It is because they like their idol. They want toimitate their behaver. Nevertheless, older people is hard to have an idol. Theymaybe think it is boring. So those idols behaver is more crucial for youngadult. If they did something good. That will stimulate young adult to do thisthing. For example, Luhan is a famous singer in China. He has numerous fans. Heis a nice boy which is always contribute to program for public good. Thatinfluence his fans to do the same thing. His fans always go to help poor peopleor concern about little student in the remote place. His nice behaver stimulatea lot of people to do the good thing. That this celebrities power. Because ofthis power young adult will impact by their icon.
    It is no denyingthat, older people will be also influenced by celebrities. It is because thosecelebrities are always shown in TV, they often be focus by public. Theyrepresent our society even our period. They are leader in our life. So theiropinion will help older people to change perspective and follow this world.However the older people spend a long time to form their own mind world. So itis not easy to change them.
    In a word,celebrities behaver influence both on younger people and older people. It i**ecause they are some people who we always focus on. But compare with olderpeople, younger people were easier been influence. It is not only because theyhave less experience, but also their idol will stimulate them.


    2楼2017-05-17 20:13
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      Every generation has its own celebrities, who might be famous athletes and actors, politicians, businessmen, scientists, etc. There is no denying that these celebrities' ideas have a great influence on modern people, especially young people. In my opinion,nowadays,relative to old people,young people have more time and ways to get knowledge of these celebrities and prefer to follow their fashion and behaviors.
      First of all, young people prefer to set some celebrities they love as their model, follow their ways of success. For example, children who want to be a successful businessman would like to set Bill Gates as their example to encourage themselves in study and life. They could study hard in order to get ready to enter the society. Through a series of social practice, young people harvest not only knowledge but also a kind of spirit, whatever do anything, persistence is the most important virtue. These knowledge and experience may help them in their future life. So influenced by celebrities, young people have more choices to regular their time and experience, while the older people may have no such opportunities.
      Secondly, young people are more enthusiastic to life and have more time and energy to concentrate on what they want to achieve. Besides the celebrities' experience, young people prefer to follow their fashion and style, this is one of the reason why companies invite celebrities to advertise their products. It is conceivable that young people have more time and ways than the older people to get knowledge of celebrities, such as TV shows, movies, magazines, etc. According to a report which made by a market research company, among 1000 younger than 35 years old people, more than 87% of them prefer buy products recommended by celebrities rather than those without celebrities' recommendation. At the same time, researchers found among 1000 older than 35 years old people only 43% of them will take the celebrities' recommendation into consideration. This shows celebrities' opinion have more effect on young people.
      Above all, young people are more influenced by celebrities' opinion than old people. Young people like to use their idols to encourage them, do what their idols do, and even dress what their idols' clothes. So we conclude celebrities' views are more important for young people.


      3楼2017-05-18 18:06
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        提纲:
        同意:
        1、 年轻人更了解他们,通过一些新型科技和媒体与这些名人有更多的接触。而老年人对于新型的媒体和途径比较生疏.
        2、 很多年轻人会把他们当作未来努力和奋斗的榜样,并且向他们学习。而老年人大多数认为他们只是电视上的“路人甲”与自己的生活没太多关系。
        3、 让步段:即使有些著名的国家体育运动员对于老年人来说也很重要,因为他们因为赢得了某些重要的比赛,可能成为了全民族人民的骄傲。但是他们对于年轻人来说更为重要,因为可以激发他们学习这项运动,或者学习他们身上的一些精神,对于他们未来的发展也是很有好处的。
        It is widely accepted that celebrities have strong impact on our daily life. Not only the young but also the old are consciously or unconsciously influenced by the celebrities from advertisements, movies and TV shows. However, because of different life styles between old people and young people, whether celebrities are more important to young people than old people has been a debate. Personally, I agree with this view.
        Firstly, young people have more chances and channels to contact the news of celebrities and fully understand them. At the age of information explosion and the high technology, young people know better about the new style of media or social net workings than old people and the publicity of the celebrities in today’s society is based on that. For example, as a college student, I spend a lot of time on the Facebook, twitter and blog to know some breaking news and gossips of Emma Watson, my favorite actress. Which movie she will act? How is her summer vacation? Where she is going next week? I want to know everything about her and it has been an important part of a fan’s life. The only way I can know these news is through the new media. However, my grandmother has no idea about the network at all. She even cannot text fluently, not to mention twittering. She has no sources to know what is happening of the celebrities. Therefore, my grandmother can only learn some celebrities from TV and newspaper which are much narrower than the Internet.
        Second, plenty of young people take the celebrity as their model and try to follow their steps to succeed too. Because most celebrities used to be one of our ordinary people and they all have made a lot of efforts to be successful. In this sense, even though young people may cannot copy their experience and hardly get that high achievements they got, their stories and some good qualities can stimulate young people to study hard and live a better life. However, old people always regard celebrities as the same strangers on the TV. They cannot tell the differences and celebrities have not much help to the old’s future life or career. So just like my grandmother, she cannot understand me why I am so crazy about a star and has no idea what knowledge I can learn from them. Therefore, old people mostly are just influenced by celebrities from the advertisements cannot be run through the life.
        Admittedly, I concede that there are still many celebrities do influence old peoples' lives, like the national athletes who won the Olympic Games. They have become the pride of the whole nationality. So maybe at that period, every one including old people will talk about the champions. However, these athletes are more important to young people, because it will motivate them learn this kind of sport or learn some qualities from them, like never say give up, hard-working or time management. For example, after Na Li won the French Open, learning tennis had been a fad around the China among teenagers. So young people will get more influence than old ones.
        In conclusion, young people have more connections between celebrities and most of celebrities are young too. Celebrities will have more similar ideas and activities with young people, and on the contrary have more gaps with old people. Thus, young people will be influenced more easily.


        4楼2017-05-18 22:14
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          思路:
          年轻人对名人更加好奇,而且有更多了解名人的方法
          年轻人的思想还有可塑造性,而老人的想法已经固定不易改变
          很多明星是年轻人,与年轻人更有共鸣,与老人的代沟较大
          With the development of the society and economy, various professions have become more prosperous than before, and there have been an increasingly numberof celebrities in many fields. In that, the influence of the celebrities to thepublic cannot be easily ignored. The debate that whether the celebrities’opinions have more important effect on young people than on old people has caught a lot of people’s attention. Personally, I agree that young people are influencedmuch more.
          Firstly, compared with old people, young people are more curious about the stars and have more methods to get various celebrities information. Withthe population of the smart phones, the Internet, computers and so on, it is pretty easy for young people to search any information they need by utilizing the most convenient way. What’s more, the information interchange between young people is much easier with the help of APP such as Wechat, facebook, and twitter. For example, my father and I are the crazy fans of the famous basketball player, Kobe Bryant. I got the information concerning the Kobe’s retirement from NBA on the Internet the moment he announced the decision, while my dad knew the news after several days from the TV.
          Secondly, the mind of young people is more feasible than old people and easily affected by the external environment. Old people have experienced alot of things and already formed their steady world view, and the celebrities’ opinions cannot easily produce profound and lasting influence on them. However,young people is much easier to be affected. For instance, when I was a high school student, my best friend, Bob, was tired of studying and wanted to drop out. One day, he watched an interview of the most famous Chinese singer JayChou on the TV, and was moved by Jay Chou’s experience and his spirt. Finally,he decided to carry on his education and never easily give up.
          The last but not the least, because most of the celebrities are young people, old people cannot easily follow their steps and there are hugegaps between the young celebrities and the old people. In that, some old people may even choose to ignore any young celebrities’ opinions and live in their own style. While the young people grow in modern environment and have more common thoughts and activities with most young celebrities, therefore, the celebrities’opinions have more profound effect on young people.
          According the reasons above, we can safely draw the conclusion that the young people are more easily influenced by the celebrities.
          Andy Lee


          6楼2017-05-20 01:22
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            Agree
            1.Older people已经形成了自己的思维方式,而年轻人因为生活阅历少,所以相比较而言更容易被说服。
            2.年轻人中追星的人更多,所以相较于年长的人,年轻人更容易受他们偶像的影响。
            3.让步:虽然celebrity的观点对年长者也有影响,但从影响的程度和被影响者的数量上来看,celebrity对年轻人的作用更大。
            With the development of technology,we can not only see celebrities in TV play,but also in various genres of TV shows,talk show and other social media,such as Facebook and Instagram.And the influence that the celebrities bring to people,both the young people and the old people,is increased these year,and I think that the perspective that celebrities hold is more influential to the young people rather than the older.
            Firstly,I believe that a majority of older people had formed a stable thinking about the things happen around the world through their accumulated experience during their years of life,whereas the young people doesn’t have.So the older people won’t easily accept the opinions from others unless the opinion is really very convincing,such as the views from the reputable scholar,rather than the entertainers or athletes,which their regarded as the people with poor education.Thus in many situations,they prefer to insist on their own perspective as they might had a relatively experience,which told them what those thing should exactly be.However,on the contrary,the young people’s life experience is scarce and the information they acquired is also limited,hence they are more likely to be persuaded and then accept the things that the celebrities say.
            Secondly,most of the young people have their own idol and are more likely to mimic their idol’s behavior or be more concerned about the topics which their idol are focused on.However,the older people,just like my parents,usually pay close attention to the skills their idols owned.For instance,Li Yuchun,a famous actress in China,is really concerned about the charity activities,she often pays a visit to the place that is in a poor condition in order to help the needy people to lead a relatively better life by providing some necessities or helping them to improve their education system.And then,her fans follow her steps and participate in this activities spontaneously and even establish a foundation,which helps a lot of people these years.And now the foundation is famous either and hold a really good reputation.
            In conclusion,the celebrities,like the reputable doctor which is quite convincing,do have some impact on the older people,but level of being influenced is not that obvious compared to the young.Thus,I assert that the influence of the celebrities are more obvious on the young people,which are less experienced and more likely to imitate their idol.


            8楼2017-05-20 20:20
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              Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to young people than to older people.
              提纲:
              1.生活上,明星的意见和选择对于年轻人更重要。所以很多广告商就会请明星去做广告,因为年轻一代有很多粉丝,他们希望和自己的偶像用同一款手机,穿一款衣服,图同一款口红。
              2. 学习上,明星的话对年轻人更重要。比如emma watson之前发起的地铁丢书活动,很多她的同龄人积极响应多读书的号召。因为明星的话语和行动经过网络等新媒体的传播被成倍的放大,对新一代来说影响就更大。而老一辈接触新媒体相对更少,所以明星的意见对于他们来说不那么重要。
              3. 公益上,明星的意见对年轻人也更重要。现在很多明星很热衷于做公益,带动了很多年轻人去做公益,因为很多年轻人把他们当作意见领袖。但是老的一代人他们有更多的人生经验,更相信自己判断,所以明星的公益活动对他们影响不大。
              The celebrities like famous entertainters and athletes have a lot of attractions among ordinary people. The views of these influencial persons are more significant to young generation than to older generation, for their opinions would be magnified by new media and have more impact on the young who have little life experience. My reasoning and specific examples are given below.
              In daily life, celebrities' recommendations are more of great importance to young people than to older ones. Many teenagers regard celebrated movies stars, singers and athletes as their idols or examples, and are far more influenced by their selections. For example, many advertisers invite many well-known people who have dozens of fans to advertise their products, so that they can aim their messages at the young followers of these celebrities. Buying the products advertised by their idols make such followers feel that they have something in common with their idols. Using the same smart phones, wearing the identical clothes, and painting the coincident lipstiicks will give them great satisfactions. However, this recommendation would seldoms strick on the older people, because minority of them will be attracted by celebrites and they have acumen and their own decisions.
              In learning, the perspectives of famed persons are more consequential to the youth than the aged. Many celecrities are the examples among adolescents, and their statements may encourage many young people. For instance, Emma Watson supports the activity named "Books On The Underground" and becomes a representitive of this activity on social media, attracting a lot of people to read more books in their life. Many young people acquire information by new media like Internet. The claims and actions of known people will be magnified by the Internet, which will be considerably influencial to young people. By contrast, the aged usually have little interest to focus on the information on new media, and the assertions of celebrities seldom contribute to their learning process.
              In benevolent activities, the proposal of celebrities play a more significant role among young people than on the aged group. A great many best-known and wealthy people donate their money to charity or sponsor some destitute children, inspiring many young persons to get more and more involved in benevolent activities, because a lot of young persons think the celebrities as opinion leaders. In addition, the children supported by these celebrities would engage in benevolent activities in the future because they have got help from others. Yet, the older people have their own life experience and judgement, and they will not be easily influenced by this kind of activities of famed people.
              In short, in different extent, the celebrities's opinions and behaviors more importantly affect the young people' life than the older people's from various aspects. The young assign priority to the celebrities' views, while the aged think highly of their own thoughts.
              小火华


              9楼2017-05-21 20:03
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                Recently, the question whether opinions of celebrities pales into more significance to young people than the older people has set the internet ablaze and triggered a heated debate which divide people into two camps with opposite opinions. As far as I am concerned, I believe that celebrities viewpoints are more essential to the young than the older .
                First, there is no deny that celebrities opinions are more important for young people since young people prefer to engaging in these celebrities activities . With the development of communication devices, it is easy for young people to have a grasp of the latest news of their favorite celebrities even their daily schedules. However, for old people even if they have passions to concern about these celebrities, they might be impeded by failing to getting continually information of them . For the older, these celebrities are too far to reach . Take myself as an example, my favorite star is Xue zhiqian, who always tell us that his wish is world peace. He often participate in some activities such as taking care of disabled people, donating stuff to children in poverty and appealing us to save water. Thanks to joining in his fancy club , I always have chance to take part in some of these projects he was devoted to . In a sense, his opinions of hoping world peace has deeply impacted me , I am more likely to be a volunteer and then help more people in needs.
                What’s more ,Nowadays most of young people have a positive outlook on the value so they are more likely to run after these celebrities and then set this celebrity for his or her role model.Thus ,it is clearly that celebrities are more important to young cause banks of young people take their cellphones just in case of missing any news about their entertainers . Owing to more and more young people have a tendency to purchase the goods that their favorite stars are advertising . Stars who advertising various kinds of products are here to stay. They claim that their role models opinions not only represent what he said but also represent what they did . Compared with young people, old people just care about their relatives and what happened in the realistic world.
                To put it in a nutshell, by taking account all these factors discussed above, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that celebrities opinions are more important to young people.
                astro 111


                10楼2017-05-23 15:03
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                  With the development of social media, people have various approaches to access information about celebrities, such as the smartphones, computers, and TV shows. A hotly-discussed proposal has been brought to attention recently: whether the comments of celebrities are of greater importance to the young orto the old. From my perspective, I tend to believe that views of the famousperson have greater influence on the young.
                  Firstly,interpersonal skills, a vital element in every aspect of personal and professional life, can be learned from the celebrities. This kind of skills are dispensable forthe young to be a well-rounded person. With social media, people see that how celebrities express their ideas through both verbal and non-verbal means appropriately.Their decent manner of speech and behavior encourage the young convey theiropinions with specific methods. For instance, learning the interpersonal skillswell, the young people who used to treat their parents impatiently cancommunicate with their parents politely and patiently. Consequently, it isimperative for the young than the old to grasp the interpersonal skills fromthe famous people.
                  Secondly,the famous people’s pursuing of success stimulates the young to fight for their dreams. No one can be successful overnight, so are the celebrities. For each ambitious individual who strives to accomplish tremendous success, it is crucial to recognize that the way to success is paved with numerous challenges.To be a successful runner, he must master the skills about running, maintain asuitable eating habit to keep energetic, practice efficiently according to thecoach’s advices, and the most important is that never give up and the finalsuccess will come right after the last try. The same is to the young, especially the ones who are eager to succeed in academic learning or working. Therefore,the celebrities’ value of success can be a motivation for the young to achieve successregardless of any setbacks.
                  Finally,famous entertainers give the young a better understanding abouthow to deal with pressure when the young feel stressful. Numerous famous entertainers regard their life as overwhelming owing to crammed schedules, giving concerts, participatingTV shows and meeting their fans, thus the celebrities assert that it is dispensable to release the pressure after hard work. In the fiercely competitive society, young people are facing more diversified pressure from academic learning, work and family than the old. Reading inspiring books or appreciating marvelous movies will distract the young from daily worries andconcerns, which can lower their levels of stress significantly. As a result,learning from celebrities’ attitude paves the way for the young to keep a balanced life.
                  After ruminating over all these factors: celebrities’ views can be an effect way to learn interpersonal skills, stimulate the young to chase their dreams and give theyoung an incentive to keep a balanced life. It is more advantageous for us tomake a conclusion that young people could gain more lessons than the old about life from the celebrities.
                  ypwtt


                  11楼2017-05-23 20:31
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