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Han Mei, a chinese girl , she is sixteen years old. She studys in a highschool in Beijing. She lives there alone because her families live in Hangzhou. She has a lot of friends there, so she doesn't feel alone.


来自Android客户端1楼2018-12-01 10:52回复
    there 去掉,有点画蛇添足,最后的alone 换成lonely


    IP属地:天津来自Android客户端2楼2018-12-01 11:31
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      she she she she


      IP属地:湖北3楼2018-12-01 13:36
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        IP属地:福建来自Android客户端4楼2018-12-01 14:17
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          把第一句里面的she去掉,还有studys应该是studies,highschool分开,如果以初中生的水平的话这样改就差不多了


          IP属地:澳大利亚来自iPhone客户端5楼2019-11-24 13:07
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