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《Bury the Light》
《湮光》
Immortal temptation takes over my mind
不朽的诱惑侵蚀我的魂魄
Condemned
却也让我备受心灵的谴责
Falling weak on my knees
刀锋入体，双膝跪倒在地
Summon the strength of mayhem
人魔分离，释放毁灭之力
I am the storm that is approaching
我是即将降临的暴风雨
Provoking black clouds in isolation
只身卷起苍穹中的乌云
I am reclaimer of my name
我将再次昭示我的存在
Born in flames, I have been blessed
浴火重生，顶礼膜拜
My family crest is a demon of death
阎魔的纹章相传世代
Forsakened, I am awakened
从噩梦中惊醒时我已被遗弃
A phoenix's ash in dark divine
如同不死鸟的灰烬坠落在地
Descending misery
支离破碎的苦痛折磨着躯体
Destiny chasing time
逆转命运的步伐却未曾停息
Inherit the nightmare, surrounded by fate
背负诅咒与厄运
Can't run away
切断了所有退路
Keep walking the line, between the light
于光影斑驳中蹒跚前进
Led astray
却不曾想早已误入歧途
Through vacant halls I won't surrendеr
穿越空虚的礼堂，我永不会投降
The truth revealеd in eyes of ember
燃起余烬的双眼，望穿层层真相
We fight through fire and ice forever
伴随冰火的交织，我们厮杀不止
Two souls, once lost, and now they remember
曾经迷失的双魂，如今铭记彼此
I am the storm that is approaching
我是即将降临的暴风雨
Provoking black clouds in isolation
只身卷起苍穹中的乌云
I am reclaimer of my name
我将再次昭示我的存在
Born in flames, I have been blessed
浴火重生，顶礼膜拜
My family crest is a demon of death
阎魔的纹章相传世代
Forsakened, I am awakened
从噩梦中惊醒时我已被遗弃
A phoenix's ash in dark divine
如同不死鸟的灰烬坠落在地
Descending misery
支离破碎的苦痛折磨着躯体
Destiny chasing time
逆转命运的步伐却未曾停息
Disappear into the night
无声无息地消失于黑夜
Lost shadows left behind
过往的阴霾被尽数抛却
Obsession's pulling me
合并的夙愿支撑我的步伐
Fading, I've come to take what's mine
我终将取回属于我的一切
Lurking in the shadows under veil of night
瘦削的身影在夜幕下湮没
Constellations of blood pirouette
杀戮的图腾于肌肤上交错
Dancing through the graves of those who stand at my feet
旅途中妄加阻挠的已被一一攻克
Dreams of the black throne I keep on repeat
脑海里挥之不去的是那黑暗王座
A derelict of dark, summoned from the ashes
弃置的邪恶自灰烬中被召唤
The puppet master congregates all the masses
傀儡师聚集了他的魔宠同伴
Pulling strings, twisting minds as blades hit
暗影射出尖刺，梦魇扭曲心智
You want this power then come try and take it
想要这份力量，那就尽管试试

Beyond the tree
离树不远的地方
Fire burns
烈火吞噬童年的楼房
Secret love
不复存在的母爱
Bloodline yearns
深深刻入恸哭的血脉
Dark minds embrace
千疮百孔的魂魄
Crimson joy
已然浸透鲜血与罪恶
Does your dim heart
黯淡无光的心扉
Heal or destroy
是被救赎还是被摧毁
Bury the light deep within
就此将之湮灭，内心深处的辉光
Cast aside, there's no coming home
从来一无所有，又何须流连彷徨
We're burning chaos in the wind
烈火裹挟狂风，焚尽混沌的碎片
Drifting in the ocean all alone
乘上一叶孤舟，切裂这无尽汪洋

厉害，不过感觉“Cast aside, there's no coming home!”还是翻译成“抛却一切，我们早已无家可归”最好，但不妨碍你这版翻译是我觉得最好的

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