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IP属地:安徽来自iPhone客户端1楼2022-12-01 17:04回复
    蓝和橙是吧
    我不会


    来自Android客户端2楼2022-12-01 17:10
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      这是什么卷子上的读后续写,尿素过高(


      IP属地:上海来自Android客户端3楼2022-12-01 17:12
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        离谱,要素过多。


        IP属地:重庆来自Android客户端4楼2022-12-01 17:18
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          写的这么通俗易懂还融合了这么多要素


          IP属地:辽宁来自Android客户端5楼2022-12-01 17:38
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            感觉原文不应该写她grew hot 应该改成felt hot
            grow作系动词加冷热似乎更适用于天气


            IP属地:上海来自Android客户端7楼2022-12-01 17:47
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              要扭转到車万剧情上不是不可以,但这种剧情肯定会吃亏


              IP属地:辽宁来自Android客户端8楼2022-12-01 18:57
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                没做过这种题目,乱写的。字数多了,就当看着玩吧:
                Chen missed seeing her talking to the birds. He was also curious about the stories Lan told. “I will ask the birds,” Chen thought. But when he climbed up the tree, he found nothing but an empty nest, for the birds that dwelled there had migrated. Chen began to feel lonely. “If she ever returns,” he decided, “I will pay her to tell me her stories.” Chen went through his pocket, but he could only find the same coin that Lan had given him. Chen’s stinginess did not make him any friends.
                On a Sunday, Lan appeared under the tree. Chen rushed out of his house, heart filled with joy. But when he stood in front of Lan, he was too shy to ask her. “Why did you stop coming?” Chen asked. “My grandmother went into hibernation early this year,” Lan answered, “I’m examining the Hakurei Barrier on her behalf.” Lan saw the coin in Chen’s hand and asked: “Did you want to buy something from me?” “Yes,” Chen pleaded, “The stories you told the birds seemed interesting. Can you tell me these stories if I give you my coin?” Lan finds Chen’s voice adorable and petted Chen’s head. “I’m afraid one coin may not be enough,” she said, “but you are cute. If you want to be my Shikigami, I can tell you all my stories for free.” “But I can’t leave Mayohiga,” Chen objected, “I still need to feed the stray cats.” “It’s okay,” Lan responded in a soothing voice, “you can still live here. I will come regularly and tell you stories.” From then on, Chen joined Lan under the tree every Sunday afternoon. They share the same shade and the same stories.


                IP属地:上海9楼2022-12-01 19:00
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                  不是Ran?不是Ran


                  IP属地:云南10楼2022-12-01 20:43
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                    看不懂了


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                    IP属地:北京来自Android客户端11楼2022-12-01 20:49
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                      蓝在英文中是“Ran”,还有lan的grandmother是?yukari?


                      IP属地:北京12楼2022-12-01 21:03
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                        优质回答:我不知道


                        IP属地:江苏来自Android客户端13楼2022-12-01 22:17
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                          现役高三生按照一般读后续写的写法续了一个,不足之处敬请指教(


                          IP属地:上海来自Android客户端15楼2022-12-02 11:03
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                            看不懂


                            IP属地:广东来自Android客户端16楼2022-12-04 01:27
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