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HP FIC Harry and Hermione
By Liz
FOREWORD
This is my first fic about H&Hr. It's a short one. I decided to write it once, because I think I will give up if I only write a little every time. I try to write it to fix your flavour. The time in the story is after Voldemort has been destroyed, uses the third person's version, sees Hermione's thoughts, chooses one from Harry and Ron, whom would she choose? It's all in here.
By Liz
FOREWORD
This is my first fic about H&Hr. It's a short one. I decided to write it once, because I think I will give up if I only write a little every time. I try to write it to fix your flavour. The time in the story is after Voldemort has been destroyed, uses the third person's version, sees Hermione's thoughts, chooses one from Harry and Ron, whom would she choose? It's all in here.
It's sunny day, Hermione sits at her desk, watching the sky, it seems that she's waiting for something, and actually yes, she does, but different from others, she's waiting for owls. Today's September 17, her 19 birthday. (I remember it's 9.17, but I'm not sure. Tell me if I'm wrong, thanks.)
Two months ago, the Chosen One, Harry Potter, one of Hermione's best friend, destroyed Voldemort, and brought bright to both magic and muggle world, although none of the muggles realize that. Hermione and her another best friend Ron went with Harry for the whole year last year, so when Voldemort died, she decided to stay with her parents for some time, because maybe she will spend all rest of her life in the magic world.
Ron has been Hermione's boyfriend more than one year, and they didn't have a sweet memory for the past year, they and Harry were concentrating on Voldemort's Horcruxes and the war against the dark side, so they both ignored their love. " Harry's really good, isn't it, although he's not really handsome. I would feel more safe if Harry's beside me. What did I do? Ron's my boyfriend, not Harry, it's Ron."
"Phut, phut..." a noise breaks Hermione's thought, there're some owls outside her window. Hermione sees Hedwig and Pig and quickly let the owls in. Owls fly away after they drop down the packets. Most of them are books and candies from her friends. Suddenly, she notices one from Bulgaria, "it must be Victor, " thinks Hermione happily. It's a beautiful pink bowknot and there's a letter inside:
Two months ago, the Chosen One, Harry Potter, one of Hermione's best friend, destroyed Voldemort, and brought bright to both magic and muggle world, although none of the muggles realize that. Hermione and her another best friend Ron went with Harry for the whole year last year, so when Voldemort died, she decided to stay with her parents for some time, because maybe she will spend all rest of her life in the magic world.
Ron has been Hermione's boyfriend more than one year, and they didn't have a sweet memory for the past year, they and Harry were concentrating on Voldemort's Horcruxes and the war against the dark side, so they both ignored their love. " Harry's really good, isn't it, although he's not really handsome. I would feel more safe if Harry's beside me. What did I do? Ron's my boyfriend, not Harry, it's Ron."
"Phut, phut..." a noise breaks Hermione's thought, there're some owls outside her window. Hermione sees Hedwig and Pig and quickly let the owls in. Owls fly away after they drop down the packets. Most of them are books and candies from her friends. Suddenly, she notices one from Bulgaria, "it must be Victor, " thinks Hermione happily. It's a beautiful pink bowknot and there's a letter inside:
Dear Hermione,
Happy Birthday!
I heard about what you did 2 months ago, I'm proud of you. I send you this bowknot as a birthday present, hope you love it. And Hermione, everything's done now, could you have a visit to Bulgaria, I'm really sorry you can't come last time but you can this time, can't you?
Love,
Victor
She smiled, once ever she liked Victor, like other girls, it's really good to be liked by a famous person as Victor, but it has all passed now. Beside Krum's letter, there are other two packets, one is from Ron, the other one is from Harry. After thinks for a while, she decided to see Harry's first,
Dear Mione,
Happy Birthday!
I'm so missing you, so is Ron, when can you get here? Here, I mean, Burrow, I'm here, too. I really don't know to buy you what, I think you may get lots of books, so I don't want to buy you a book. I speat all afternoon in Diago Alley, and found this necklace is beautiful, I really hope you like it.
Open the packet, Hermione sees a crystal Cross necklace. " Sure I love it" smiles Hermione again. Then she continues the letter,
I started working in the Ministry this week, Auror, you know that, and Ron worked in the Education Department. And I think you'll go to work soon, we are so busy here, you might not want to me an Auror now, so many Death Eaters, but don't worry, we'll have much free time after this. And don't tell Ron I buy you a necklace. He might be angry, I'm wondering what he would buy you.
Love,
Harry
ps. I hope you don't mind me calling you Mione. I just realize why I call you Hermione but not Mione when I call Ron as Ron but not Ronald.
"Actually, I mind, Harry, that's why even my parents call me Hermione, but... I can consider you as an exception." thinks Hermione.
Finally, it's Ron's turn.
Dear Hermione,
"It seems that Harry didn't tell Ron about the Mione thing, well it's better than he told him." thinks Hermione."No, I should let Ron call me Mione but not Harry, what happened to me? Ron is my boyfriend! ......Well, letter first,"
Happy Birthday!
I miss you, when can you get here, I can't wait to see you again! First I wanted to make you a cake, but I gave up after I tested. I went to Diago Alley to buy you a necklace. I think you'll love it, Ginny went with me.
Hermione giggled, "why you guys become so interested in necklaces?" she thinks. She opened the packet, to her surprise, the necklace is exactly the same as the one Harry sends.
I started work in the Minidtry with Harry this week, Harry's so busy, but I'm much better. You'll start work in October 1, so come here and I'll still have some spare time to spend with you, you'll be as busy as Harry when you start work.
Love,
Ron
Happy Birthday!
I heard about what you did 2 months ago, I'm proud of you. I send you this bowknot as a birthday present, hope you love it. And Hermione, everything's done now, could you have a visit to Bulgaria, I'm really sorry you can't come last time but you can this time, can't you?
Love,
Victor
She smiled, once ever she liked Victor, like other girls, it's really good to be liked by a famous person as Victor, but it has all passed now. Beside Krum's letter, there are other two packets, one is from Ron, the other one is from Harry. After thinks for a while, she decided to see Harry's first,
Dear Mione,
Happy Birthday!
I'm so missing you, so is Ron, when can you get here? Here, I mean, Burrow, I'm here, too. I really don't know to buy you what, I think you may get lots of books, so I don't want to buy you a book. I speat all afternoon in Diago Alley, and found this necklace is beautiful, I really hope you like it.
Open the packet, Hermione sees a crystal Cross necklace. " Sure I love it" smiles Hermione again. Then she continues the letter,
I started working in the Ministry this week, Auror, you know that, and Ron worked in the Education Department. And I think you'll go to work soon, we are so busy here, you might not want to me an Auror now, so many Death Eaters, but don't worry, we'll have much free time after this. And don't tell Ron I buy you a necklace. He might be angry, I'm wondering what he would buy you.
Love,
Harry
ps. I hope you don't mind me calling you Mione. I just realize why I call you Hermione but not Mione when I call Ron as Ron but not Ronald.
"Actually, I mind, Harry, that's why even my parents call me Hermione, but... I can consider you as an exception." thinks Hermione.
Finally, it's Ron's turn.
Dear Hermione,
"It seems that Harry didn't tell Ron about the Mione thing, well it's better than he told him." thinks Hermione."No, I should let Ron call me Mione but not Harry, what happened to me? Ron is my boyfriend! ......Well, letter first,"
Happy Birthday!
I miss you, when can you get here, I can't wait to see you again! First I wanted to make you a cake, but I gave up after I tested. I went to Diago Alley to buy you a necklace. I think you'll love it, Ginny went with me.
Hermione giggled, "why you guys become so interested in necklaces?" she thinks. She opened the packet, to her surprise, the necklace is exactly the same as the one Harry sends.
I started work in the Minidtry with Harry this week, Harry's so busy, but I'm much better. You'll start work in October 1, so come here and I'll still have some spare time to spend with you, you'll be as busy as Harry when you start work.
Love,
Ron
Suddenly, the door bell rings. Hermione quickly leaves her room. She spends the rest of the day with some of her friends in primary school(she told them she went to study in other city). She's really happy to be with her old friend again. They finally ended the party at 11pm and Hermione goes to bed right after the party, she's so tired.
Hermione wakes up at 7am next morning, she's decided to go to Burrow this afternoon, "I'll see Harry and Ron soon." when she thinks of this, she feels a welter in her stomach, the necklace, what should she do?"Of course Ron loves me and I love Ron, but rencently, I think I love Harry, too, the problem is, does he love me? Oh no, what am I thinking? I shouldn't have thought that. Ron is my boyfriend! But Harry... oh stop!" Hermione says to herself, don't think Harry now. When she's wondering which necklace to wear, Mrs. Granger comes in.
"What's up, darling, you didn't look well."
"Nothing, ma. I'm just a little tired" said Hermione.
"So, sleep a little more, you'll feel better"
"But I can't! I want to sleep, but I can't!" she's telling the truth, Harry and Ron will show up in her mind as soon as she closes her eyes.
"You have something worried in your heart, dear, you looked like this for the last month. So tell me, if you want, it'll be better to speak out. I think you need some time to think yourself now, I'll be in my room if you need me." She stands up, and walks to the door.
"Wait, ma." calls Hermione," all right, I need your help."
After Mrs. Granger sits on her bed. Hermione begins to tell her mother the whole story about her, Ron and Harry, also the conflict in her heart. She thinks that she loves Harry more, but she can't do that, when she's still liking Ron and Harry and Ginny are going out. Finally, she finishes in more than 2 hours.
"Hermione," says Mrs. Granger, " it's a big choice in your life, almost the most important one, it influences the rest of your life, I don't have the right to choose for you, you have to do this yourself, be careful about it, don't be repentant of your choice after you decided, and, I have a request no matter whom you choose."
"What is it, ma?"
"Choose the one you love, love the one you choose!"
Hermione looks at her mom in surprise, Mrs. Granger smiles to her, and walks away. Leave Hermione alone, surely, Hermione needs to think something after the talk with her mother.
"Choose the one you love, love the one you choose! Choose the one you love, love the one you choose! Choose the one you love, love the one you choose!...."
Mrs. Granger's words goes around Hermione's ear, she looks at the two necklaces, puts the one Harry sends on sturdily!
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Hermione wakes up at 7am next morning, she's decided to go to Burrow this afternoon, "I'll see Harry and Ron soon." when she thinks of this, she feels a welter in her stomach, the necklace, what should she do?"Of course Ron loves me and I love Ron, but rencently, I think I love Harry, too, the problem is, does he love me? Oh no, what am I thinking? I shouldn't have thought that. Ron is my boyfriend! But Harry... oh stop!" Hermione says to herself, don't think Harry now. When she's wondering which necklace to wear, Mrs. Granger comes in.
"What's up, darling, you didn't look well."
"Nothing, ma. I'm just a little tired" said Hermione.
"So, sleep a little more, you'll feel better"
"But I can't! I want to sleep, but I can't!" she's telling the truth, Harry and Ron will show up in her mind as soon as she closes her eyes.
"You have something worried in your heart, dear, you looked like this for the last month. So tell me, if you want, it'll be better to speak out. I think you need some time to think yourself now, I'll be in my room if you need me." She stands up, and walks to the door.
"Wait, ma." calls Hermione," all right, I need your help."
After Mrs. Granger sits on her bed. Hermione begins to tell her mother the whole story about her, Ron and Harry, also the conflict in her heart. She thinks that she loves Harry more, but she can't do that, when she's still liking Ron and Harry and Ginny are going out. Finally, she finishes in more than 2 hours.
"Hermione," says Mrs. Granger, " it's a big choice in your life, almost the most important one, it influences the rest of your life, I don't have the right to choose for you, you have to do this yourself, be careful about it, don't be repentant of your choice after you decided, and, I have a request no matter whom you choose."
"What is it, ma?"
"Choose the one you love, love the one you choose!"
Hermione looks at her mom in surprise, Mrs. Granger smiles to her, and walks away. Leave Hermione alone, surely, Hermione needs to think something after the talk with her mother.
"Choose the one you love, love the one you choose! Choose the one you love, love the one you choose! Choose the one you love, love the one you choose!...."
Mrs. Granger's words goes around Hermione's ear, she looks at the two necklaces, puts the one Harry sends on sturdily!
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Brilliant! You works so efficiently, Liz. May be I am a bit jaundiced, but I think the Chinese words are liver than others. However, you've done it successfully. This will be remembered as the first English fiction in our bar, congratulations! It's a good start.
You description is good, especially of the thoughts.
I prefer a centence in your fic:
ps. I hope you don't mind me calling you Mione. I just realize why I call you Hermione but not Mione when I call Ron as Ron but not Ronald.
Such a lovely Harry, but really, it's a question :P
P.S. Hermione's birthday is Sept. 19th, and Sept. 17th is our Madam Kynwi's birthday :P
You description is good, especially of the thoughts.
I prefer a centence in your fic:
ps. I hope you don't mind me calling you Mione. I just realize why I call you Hermione but not Mione when I call Ron as Ron but not Ronald.
Such a lovely Harry, but really, it's a question :P
P.S. Hermione's birthday is Sept. 19th, and Sept. 17th is our Madam Kynwi's birthday :P
