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要素一：现象句
写作考题中会出现一个社会现象，我们就要在自己文章的第一句话将之改写，重述这个社会现象。
Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
重述后：It is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.
边读题要遍替换同义词，比如“more and more= a large amount of”
写作考题中会出现一个社会现象，我们就要在自己文章的第一句话将之改写，重述这个社会现象。
Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
重述后：It is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.
边读题要遍替换同义词，比如“more and more= a large amount of”
400字啊，怎么才能凑够400字啊。。唉
E.g. 3
In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year
between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the
advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.
It is quite common（or It is not uncommon一个意思） these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from
high school.
主被动之间的转换，以及同义替换：finish high school = graduate from high school
所以，从上文中可以看出，一般来说，现象句会在最开始加上一个套句，并且加上地点和时间。
E.g. 3
In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year
between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the
advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.
It is quite common（or It is not uncommon一个意思） these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from
high school.
主被动之间的转换，以及同义替换：finish high school = graduate from high school
所以，从上文中可以看出，一般来说，现象句会在最开始加上一个套句，并且加上地点和时间。
虽然专八已结束，但作文依旧没长进。。
要素二：点到问题
对于report（题目一般会涉及到why do you think it is important to…; how do you
think people can tackle this problem.）
E.g. 4
In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.
What do you think are the cause of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Poor student behavior seems to be increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.（个人认为这句话有误，problem前面不用加an？？我不提倡这句的写法）
要素二：点到问题
对于report（题目一般会涉及到why do you think it is important to…; how do you
think people can tackle this problem.）
E.g. 4
In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.
What do you think are the cause of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Poor student behavior seems to be increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.（个人认为这句话有误，problem前面不用加an？？我不提倡这句的写法）
