Q：邱诚；X：小菊；W：文芷；D：老丁；C：迟耀；L：骆衍
S1
L: So, youtransferred to the art class? Seriously?
Q: yes. What’s theproblem?
L: Well, what doyou think of art class? A wonderful place?
Q: or what? Is ita hell?
L: (surprised)extra art homework! Same schoolwork load! Countless discrimination from others!And you ranked No.1 in our school last term! What’s wrong with you to do so, givingup this talent!
Q: First, it’s notmy talent. It’s “them” who forced me to do that. And secondly, I love drawing.
L: what you loveis not drawing, but drawing with “her”! being with you for an entire year, Iknow you well.
Q: and I have beenwith “her” for 17 years. I know how I feel.
L: 叹气，离场
Q: I have to findmy colour, my colour without “them”

额……本来是想私信来着，但是不知现在贴吧这个私信功能算能用还是不能用还是直接回复楼主吧。
首先，我很尊重楼主能有勇气做出这个决定，对于一名高中生来说，这的确是一次胆大的尝试，所以请楼主放心，我接下来的所有评论，含义都是正面的
但是呢，有几处我有点看不下去，实在抱歉。不过我这个人一直欠打，总是揪住一些小细节不放，换种说法的话，就是强迫症吧，哈哈。什么各个人物的英文名，缺空格，用词不当这些小问题让我一看就火大啊，lz就把我想象成世界上最面目可憎的英语老师好了，我是很放心你没有见过更恶劣的。
所以我这个一样喜欢《三色》的学渣想帮助一下lz，因为我也想看到这个故事能被人用另一种方式在另一种平台演绎出来，而且学了快十四年英语，现在却很少再用，总有一种无处安放的青春的赶脚……如果lz愿意的话，我可以为你提供帮助，无偿的。保证不是猪队友，这个戏剧的基本知识我还是学习过的，英语水平放到国内的标准的话……专六左右吧。希望lz考虑一下？不管怎样，祝lz改编顺利。

好奇楼主的话剧会准备道具和服装么

S2
D: The sportsmeeting is on the next week, and our class oversees the poster for the wholegrade. C, you’ll be in charge of these things.
C: no problem. AndI nominate Q to help me.
Q: me? Well……
D: why? (talkquietly with C)
W: do you want tojoin?
Q: I’m not sure……maybe not. I’m not interested in those things.
W: well, I’drather have you joined.
Q: why? I rememberwe mat a week ago.
W: (smile)
D: Q must needsome time to think. So that’s it. School’s over, you’re free to go.
Q: 离场
W: because…… I want to see your drawings, the interesting drawings with your ownidea in it!
S3
Q: so, here weare.
W: thanks forletting us in!
X(shocked)
Q: Emm……I remember telling you about this before.
X: Ah…… yes. (quiet), but nothing about her!
Q: what?
X: nothing. Sitdown, please.
W: thanks.
X: (to Q) youstand.
X: or you may siton the floor.
Q: I’d ratherstand.
X: if you like. So,what should we do?
Q: for eachposter, I’ll draw an original version……
W: which is of notabletalent! (崇拜)
Q: and W will draw the outline sketch out of my drawing.
X: And I will scanthe sketch into the computer and colour it.
Q: completelyright.
W: you lookfamiliar with it. Have you done this before?
X: yes, I did thatlast year with him.
W: him?
X: the idiot whostands when being offered with a seat. (笑)
X: (对Q) Now, go out and draw!
Q:what???(confused)
W: you really havea good relationship!
X:(confused)NONONO! We quarrel a lot!
W: yes. Youquarrel a lot but every time after your argument, you can always get alongwell.
X: well…… kind of……
W: that’s what I’mtalking about. X and Q, have the best relationship in the world! (羡慕)
Q:(推门进来) Here’s the original version.
X: Ah! You come! (突然发现什么) OK, now get out!
Q:……
W(认真看起画稿)
X: wow! It’s soclear! Much easier to colour than the ones last years.
Q: Of course. Sheis the best artist in our class.
X: no, my point isthat your outline sketch was too bad.
Q: ……
W&Q: thanksfor your help!
X: Q, wait. (W回头，疑惑；退场) would you stay and practice drawing with me? Just the two of us.

S4
C: grave news
Q; what?
C: it’s yourparents.
Q: “them”……
C: they knew thatyour things. They’re angry about that. They want to get in control of youagain.
Q: back to theircontrol? No!
C: well, you stillhave a chance. If you can pass the exam, they will have to give you thetemporary freedom.
Q: so, is itpossible for me to pass it?
C: let me see yourwork.
(翻看)
C: are those thework from a high school art student?
C: your works canbe shown in the university gallery!
X: excellent! Sowe can still……
C: but they won’tget high marks.
X: why?!
C: they aregorgeous in creativity. Very expressive. I can see the girl in the drawing——is that you? (对Q) letting he to be yourmodel, you really are something!
X: just go on!
C: I can see itclearly that she is thinking something.
X: yes, I wasthinking about what he will cook that noon.
C: cooking?! Howlong have you stayed together!
C; but our examdoesn’t see that. You are requested to be a camera; a camera that drawseverything you see just the way they look. The marks are determined by thesimilarity your drawing shares with the real model, but not the idea you wantto express in it.
X: is there anychance that he can improve these days before the exam?
C: he is new here,not familiar with any of the skills. Obviously, he hasn’t practice much before.
X: yes he did! Weused to draw together every day since primary school!
C: but it’s notthe practice. I’m sorry, but there’s no chance for him to pass it.
X: so he willleave? (repeat)
C: you aretalented, Q, but the skill to pass the exam won’t strike you in only one month.
Q: talent, mytalent came from “her” (X). we used to draw together. Now, I’m drawing with“her” (W), my skill came from her guidance. Hah, skill……
S5
X: have you restedwell? You called me at midnight. I’m so worried that you may be awake for long.
Q: no. I sleptwell.
W; then why areyou so upset?
L: he is like thatevery time before the exam. Last time when he ranked the first, his expression wasjust like X was killed right in front of him!
X: What? Who waskilled? (beat)
Q: so, I havedecided! Since I couldn’t pass the exam, I’ll draw then way I ‘m used to.
W: that means thatyou couldn’t live here anymore!
X: that means thatyou will leave me forever!
Q: at least I’vetried my best. W guided me a lot, and X acted as my model a full day. We didtry our best. So, it’s not important what the result is! W, you want to see mydrawing, right?
I’ll do that foryou this time!
Q: (独白)what colour will I have? Orange or violet?

就是这些了，改编的时候才出到第3章，因此只有这些。
LZ文线也没有推完，因此可能有一些与剧情不符，还请原谅
LZ周1-4 不能用电脑，而这些是LZ上上周1-3 赶出来的，没办法参考原作，只能凭记忆写。如有改进建议，欢迎大家提出！【不用给我面子！！！

这就沉了吗

不行，工程量太大，一时半会是完不成了。既然楼主想听直言那我也就不避讳了，有很多地方的用法很漂亮，但是让人一眼就能认出是一篇中式英语，应试教育的受害者写出的作品，硬搬的词汇表和老师划的课文里的“好词组”太多，哪些是我所说的想必楼主自己也清楚，不用我来给你一一指出了。内容上，整体来说没有表现出这部作品的主要冲突，本来就有人喷的可有可无的运动会更是没有更好了。
不过话说回来，楼主能有这种水平在高中生中也是相当不错了，但是听我一句劝，这次演完了就好，老师喜欢领导喜欢。要是按照我的想法改出来的话，不仅篇幅太长，台上不知道自己在说什么，台下听不懂在讲什么，而且还会涉及某些在高中仍然是敏感的话题。一篇普通的作品，没有表达出要反抗忤逆的意思就已经是最好了。
不过当然，我以上一切意见都是基于“英语应该是能让所有懂英语的人理解，尤其是以英语为母语的人理解，而不是只有中国人看得懂”这个观点的，如果有吧友不同意我的鸡蛋里挑骨头，就当我是又一个没事找事的闲人吧，反正这样的人世界上又不缺（笑）。再说，在国内就是中式英语拿高分，写得好的老师都看不懂，还会被理解成你看不起他，这是亲身体验。如果楼主或者任何人对《三色》改编的英文话剧感兴趣（估计也没有吧），请回复或者私信，有人想看的话，我会创作出来的。
最后在此祝楼主首映成功。

你这人 也是头脑发热

LZ高中党，明天返校了。下周末有时间再统一回复吧