May be I can write in English like a foreigher. I have been reading Stray Birds. Oh my gosh! I am used to call it Stay Birds. may be i want the book stay with me. Tagore his words are so beautiful, so that my heart is always shaking.but i can't understand many sentences in this book. luckily, i bought the one have explanation.
famous sentence: if you shed tears when you miss the sun, you also miss the atars.
this sentences let me know people always care the great,not the insignificant.
i can't calm down to do something. i just want to do something i like.but the fact is that i must finish my holiday homework before 15th August.i don't want to copy,but i read book rather than do homework. also i can't deal many problems in my homework.as through i need time,i am wasting. 

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may be 应该是连起来的吧 maybe也许
Tagore his words are so beautiful
Tagore's words are so beautiful.
this sentences ，this sentence . 名词单复数
also i can't deal many problems in my homework.
I also can't deal with many problems
不知道修改的对不对。。

句子都太短，没衔接
比如这一句：I am used to call it Stay Birds maybe because I want the book to stay with me.
名句：famous quotation
后半段没有完全弄清楚你的意思，比如：i don't want to copy,but i read book rather than do homework. 这句话你的原意是什么？

我不想抄袭 但我宁愿看书也不要写作业……

I am used to call it Stay Birds maybe because I want the book to stay with me.的be used to 后面应加动名词吧。
应该改为I am used to calling it Stay Birds maybe because I want the book to stay with me.
是吧？

I好像什么时候都不能小写吧！！！

恩~这个我知道，我打的时候偷懒了哈~

昂= =
好象是的~嘿嘿

Maybe I can write in English like a foreigner.I have been reading Stray Birds. (Oh my gosh! I am used to calling it Stay Birds: maybe I want the book stay with me.) Tagore's words are so beautiful that my heart is always shaking, although I can't understand many of the sentences in the book. Luckily, I bought a version containing explanations.
There's a saying that "If you shed tears when you miss the sun, you'll also miss the stars." People always care about the great rather than the insignificant.
I can't calm down to do anything. I only want to do what I enjoy doing, but the fact is that I must finish my holiday homework before August 15th. I don't want to be forced to plagiarize, but I'm always reading books rather than working. Neither can I solve many of the problems in my homework.


全部改成标准美式英语了，除了最后一句，因为我不知道它的原意是什么。

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还有一点就是这三段好像都没有什么关系，是不是该加点儿什么东西来衔接...?

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我的确写错了，不过你的也不对，应该是用used to do，而不是 be used to doing，因为她表达的意思是过去习惯于，现在已经改了，举个例子
I used to get up late, but now I am used to getting up early.
我曾经起床很晚，但现在已习惯早起了。
所以应该去掉am