@魔力599我觉得你整体做得很好啊,有几个小地方我觉得可以商榷
1.
Haiyan is expected to exit ...
将在星期六清晨退出
肯定程度是不是有些变了
2. central Philippines
菲律宾中心


3
an unknown number of the at least five thousand people living in tents since the earthquake have stayed put
至地震停止以来,至少有54人生活在帐篷中,到具体人数仍不清楚。
an unknown number of the at least five thousand people ... have stayed put
至少5000人中数量不详者没有采取行动
什么样的5000人?
... people living in tents since the earthquake
自从地震以来住在帐篷中的5000人
4.
“They live in a dilemma,” says Aspi. “Some of the evacuation centers have been compromised by the earthquake, but there are also risks along the roadside leading there. There are imminent threats of landslides, roads have been damaged and bridges weakened.”
“他们生活在困境中,”
这里的dilemma是那个选择都不给力的意思吧,所以后面说疏散中心被地震破坏了【台风来了也不给力,但是要离开选择去其他安全的庇护所的话】通往哪里的道路也有危险
5
and bridges weakened.
桥梁也被毁坏了
这个应该是说台风导致载荷能力变小,承重能力变弱,技术等级下降吧
6.
in the central province of Cebu
该省的中心电路
从结构上说,核心是province啊
前面central 给出有关它的更多信息
后面of Cebu也是
宿务位于菲律宾中部,其实从上文也能猜出来,因为通篇说的是同一场风暴


7.
the difficulty of communicating with affected areas
受灾地区交流困难
通讯困难?
8.
the center of the 600 km wide Haiyan
中心宽度600公里的海燕
宽度600公里的海燕的中心?